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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修 改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不讨分。

People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can't agree complete. Last Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing; I found several elders absorb in feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized that the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some coffee shop, which used to be old and shabby, were decorated pretty well and caught my attention. On both sides of the street were big trees covering the whole city, making a green city. At that moment, I found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!

 

第一处:删掉of 第二处: complete→completely 第三处: wake→waked或woke。 第四处:there→where 第五处: absorb→absorbed 第六处: but→and 第七处: shop→shops 第八处:making后加it 第九处: a→the 第十处: ignore→ignoring 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了上周五早晨散步的时候,我发现了生活中的美。 第一处:考查lack的用法。句意:人们总是说我们缺少发现生活中的美的眼睛。此处的lack是及物动词,其后直接接宾语,of是多余的,故删掉of。 第二处:考查副词。句意:我不能完全同意(这个观点)。修饰动词agree用副词,故complete改为completely。 第三处:考查时态。句意:上周五,我醒得很早,决定去散步。事情发生在过去,应该用一般过去时,wake的过去式有两种形式:waked和woke,故wake改为waked或woke。 第四处:考查定语从句。句意:在广场上,许多老年人在跳舞;我发现几位老年人正全神贯注地喂鸟。此处为定语从句,关系词指代先行词square并在从句中作地点状语,故there改为where。 第五处:考查非谓语动词。句意同上。此处为“find+宾语+宾补”结构,be absorbed in表示“全神贯注于”,此处去掉be作宾语补足语,故absorb改为absorbed。 第六处:考查连词。句意:没有很多车,我意识到这座城市看起来是那么干净美丽。clean和beautiful是并列而非转折关系,故but改为and。 第七处:考查名词复数。句意:一些以前又旧又破的咖啡店(现在)装修得很好,引起了我的注意。some修饰可数名词复数,后面的were也表明此处用可数名词复数,故shop改为shops。 第八处:考查代词。句意:街道两旁是大树,覆盖了整个城市,使它成为一个绿色的城市。此处为“make+代词+名词(短语)”结构,此处指代前面的city,故making后加it。 第九处:考查冠词。句意:在那一刻,我发现这座城市是如此有趣。city在文中不是第一次出现,此处表示特指,故a改为the。 第十处:考查非谓语动词。句意:我多么后悔以前忽视了它的美丽!regret后接动名词作宾语,故ignore改为ignoring。  
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