Question

假如你是某杂志健康栏目的主持人Mr Helper，人们经常写信询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息：

1．健康的重要性；

2．给出保持健康的方法，如：科学饮食，多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡；避免高糖，高脂的食物；摒弃不良习惯；多锻炼等。

注意：词数100左右。

Dear readers,

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Yours sincerely,

Mr Helper

Answer

Dear readers,

It goes without saying that no pleasure can be tasted by man without health. Health is far more important than anything else. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.

How can we keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you to follow.

To begin with, we should develop good habits. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat. What's more, we have to get rid of those habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. Last but not least, we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Proper diet and enough exercise do good to our health.

If we follow the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.

Yours sincerely,

Mr Helper

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分总式

要求：1. 健康的重要性

2. 针对“如何保持健康”给出建议，即是给出保持健康的方法

3. 总结上述做法的好处

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）：

pleasure；health；enable sb. to do sth.；our career；keep healthy；develop good habits；lots of；have to； get rid of；damage one’s health；such as；every day；do good to one’s health；lead a healthy life等

第三步：连词成句：

1. It goes without saying that no pleasure can be tasted by man without health.

2. Health is far more important than anything else.

3. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.

4. We should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat.

5. We have to get rid of those habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.

6. We'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong.

7. Proper diet and enough exercise do good to our health.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）：

1.表文章结构顺序：To begin with, …. Last but not least….

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, and等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改