Question

你是李华,就读于一所国际学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑 Peter,希望结识一位来自英国国家的笔友( pen pal),以便相互学习对方的语言和文化。内容包括:

1.写信目的;2.自我介绍;3.表示感谢。

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数;

3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以便行文连贯。

Dear peter:

I am Li Hua, a tenth-grader at an international language school in China

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li hua

Answer

Dear peter

I am Li Hua, a tenth-grader at an international language school in China. I am now writing to ask you for a favor.

In order to have a better understanding of Chinese and English language and culture, I would like to make a pen pal from an English speaking country. being easygoing and skilled at communicating I am easy to get along well with. Not only am I familiar with the profound history of China, but also have a strong interest in Chinese traditional music.

I would appreciate it if you consider my request. Thank you in advance. (84 词)

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本文考查应用文写作。写信给《英文早报》的编辑 Peter,希望结识一位来自英国国家的笔友( pen pal),以便相互学习对方的语言和文化。

第一步：审题

体裁：提纲类作文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

要求：包含以下内容：1.写信目的；2.自我介绍；3.表示感谢。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

ask you for a favor，have a better understanding of，make a pen pal，skilled at，get along well with，familiar with，in advance，look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.I am now writing to ask you for a favor.

2.In order to have a better understanding of Chinese and English language and culture, I would like to make a pen pal from an English speaking country.

3.eing easygoing and skilled at communicating I am easy to get along well with.

4.Not only am I familiar with the profound history of China, but also have a strong interest in Chinese traditional music.

5.Looking forward to your early reply.

第四步：连句成篇

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。