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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ),并在其下面写岀该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写岀修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week our class vote on what to do for our class outing: visit the Singapore Zoo and go to the night Safari(夜间动物园).Our girls wanted to go to the zoo, but since we were in the minority, we lost the boys, who all wanted the safari. We got the admission rate for students, which was greatly since I still had enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as everything at the souvenir shop. The Safari was scary but really a fun. As we took the ride over the park's dark jungle, we could see the eyes of many creatures look out at us. Most of the animals here sleep when there is sunlight and wake up at night.

 

vote→voted and→or Our→We lost后面加to greatly→great everything→something fun前面的a删除 over→through look→looking here→there 【解析】 本文为记叙文。文章叙述了上周作者的班级同学去夜间野生动物园里的情况。 1.考查动词的时态。句意:上周我们班投票决定我们班郊游该去哪。根据时间状语“last week”可知,本句要用一般过去时,故把vote改为voted。 2.考查语境及连词。句意:上周我们班投票决定该去哪?:去the Singapore Zoo或者继续the night Safari。根据上一句“上周我们班投票决定该去哪?”可知,后面是一个选择,是去新加坡动物园还是去夜间野生动物园?表示选择要用“or”,意思为“或者”。故把and改为or。 3.考查代词的格。句意:我们女孩们想去动物园。分析本句可知,句中的主语是我们(we),与女孩girls是同位语关系,而非所属关系,所以把Our改为We。 4.考查固定搭配。句意:但由于我们是少数,我们输给了男生。“lose to...”为固定搭配,意为“败给......,输给......”,故要在lost后添加to。 5.考查形容词作表语。句意:我们买了学票,这太好了,因为我还有足够的钱买一本公园的小册子以及纪念品商店的东西。分析句子可知,本句是定语从句,其中which是指前面的“我们买了学生票”,即买到了学生票很棒。所以greatly在句中作表语,而副词不能作表语,故把greatly改为great。 6.考查不定代词。句意:因为我还有足够的钱去买一本关于公园的小册子和纪念品商店的东西。something“某事,某物,认为重要(或值得注意)的事物”;everything意为“每件事;所有事物”。根据常识可知,是指可以买商店里的所有东西。因此把everything改为something。 7.考查不可数名词。句意:这次旅行很吓人,但真的很有趣。句中的fun是不可数名词,所以不能加不定冠词a,故去掉fun前的a。 8.考查介词辨析。句意:当我们乘车穿过公园黑暗的丛林时,我们可以看到许多动物的眼睛正看着我们。根据语境可知,本句是指乘车穿过公园的丛林。“over” 在......上面穿越。而“through”“从......里面穿过”。故把over改为through。 9.考查非谓语。句意:当我们骑马穿过公园的黑暗丛林时,我们可以看到许多生物的眼睛正望着我们。分析句子可知,本句中的see的宾语the eyes of many creatures 与动词look out是主动关系,表示动作正在发生,要用动词的-ing形式,“see sb. doing”意为“看见某人在做某事”。故把 look改为looking。 10.考查副词辨析。句意:这里的大多数动物白天睡觉,晚上醒来。根据上下文的内容可知,此处是指那儿的(there)的动物而不是这儿(here)的动物。 故把here改为there。  
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D.they fail to realize earlier the importance of hard work

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C.it encourages one to go forward in face of difficulty

D.it provides the right direction of efforts

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D.The officials who have to work out of their offices.

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A.Sent out. B.Sent up.

C.Sent in. D.Sent on.

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