Question

Write an e-mail to your father, who is on a business trip, telling him about the holiday plans you and your mother have made for your family. Use the information below to help you.

1. where you should go and why

2. when you should travel

3. what activities you can do

4. what you can see

5. the length of time

6. the cost

注意：1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad

I’ve looked at several possible places where we can go on holiday and checked Mum’s schedule. We think we should go to_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Bye for now

Love

LiHua

Answer

Dear Dad

I’ve looked at several possible places where we can go on holiday and checked Mum’s schedule. We think we should go to Shandong Province because none of us have ever been there before. If we go, we’ll have an active holiday climbing Mount Tai. Mum can explore famous lakes and springs in Ji’nan. We can also visit Qufu, where Confucius was buried. I think you and Mum would like this.

We can travel in May, between the lst and the 7th. The trip lasts 4 days and 3 nights. It costs only 1, 300 yuan per person, so Mum will be pleased with that.

I think this trip sounds very exciting and it sounds just like what you and Mum want. Let me know if I should book it.

Bye for now.

Love

LiHua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。给正在出差的父亲写封电子邮件，告诉他你和母亲为家人制定的假期计划。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

要求：1. where you should go and why

2. when you should travel

3. what activities you can do

4. what you can see

5.the length of time

6. the cost

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

looked at ;go on holiday; have an active holiday; be pleased with; between…and…; bye for now

第三步：连词成句

1. I’ve looked at several possible places where we can go on holiday and checked Mum’s schedule.

2. If we go, we’ll have an active holiday climbing Mount Tai.

3. We can travel in May, between the lst and the 7th.

4. It costs only 1, 300 yuan per person, so Mum will be pleased with that.

5. I think this trip sounds very exciting and it sounds just like what you and Mum want.

第四步：润色修改

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。