Question

假定你是李华，一名高二的学生。你校准备在下周举办一场以“新时代、新青年应该勇于做新时代的追梦人”为主题的英文演讲活动。你有意参加，请结合自己的实际，以“We are all dream chasers”为主题，写一篇英文演讲稿，简要谈谈自己的梦想和打算。

注意：1.词数100左右：内容完整，意思连贯。

2.开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

Dear fellow students.

I am Li Hua, a senior two student in our school.

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Thank you very much for your attention!

Answer

Dear fellow students,

I am Li Hua, a senior two student in our school. President Xi said in his New Year’s Speech,“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers, especially the students.” I’m so proud that I am the one. So, today I am honored to be here to talk about how I chase my dream.

As for my own dream, I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. I believe to help others is to help ourselves, and it surely can bring me happiness and pleasure.

To realize my dream, firstly, I must try to work hard from now on. And I must learn as much as possible so that I can get into a good medical college, where I will prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Secondly, I have to train myself to be more careful, which is the basic to do everything. Finally, believe myself. Because confidence is the key to success. I think only in this way can I accomplish my goal, my Chinese dream.

No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

Thank you very much for your attention!

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 写一篇演讲稿。

第一步：

审题: 演讲稿

人称：第一、三人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表达很荣幸参加演讲，第二部分叙述自己的梦想，

第三部分对大家的倾听表示感谢。

要点：

1. 很荣幸有机会参加演讲

2．叙述自己的梦想

①梦想是当一名医生

②原因：医生救人生命，帮助人们过上更好的生活，给人们带来幸福

③实现梦想的方法：努力学习；训练自己要细心；要有信心

3．要坚持梦想

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

a senior two student；dream chaser；proud ；chase dream；save one’s life; respectable ; professional knowledge ; surely ; happiness ; realize one’s dream ; from now on ; prepare oneself for …; confidence ; accomplish one’s goal；hold on to；come true

第三步：连词成句

1.I am honored to be here to talk about how I chase my dream.

2.Doctors save people’s lives.

3.Doctors can help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.

4.To help others is to help ourselves

5. I will prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor.

6.I have to train myself to be more careful.

7. Confidence is the key to success.

8. I can accomplish my goal, my Chinese dream.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning

Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover , apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though , yet , while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, As a result, as a consequence, consequently , thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。