Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Last Sunday I had a great experience in a small town locating in the southwest of China. I was very lucky but was invited as one of the judges of an English competition among kid. They were from a privately school. At the first they gave a speech about themselves, their school and their families. Then they sang songs, recite poems, and even played the guitar. That was so impressive was a girl who sang an English song named Ten Green Sheep. Although he didn’t have a good voice, she put her heart into it. All the participants were thought highly by the judges. They, who was aged 5 to 11, tried so hard that we were moved by them.

Answer

1. locating → located

2. but → and

3. kid → kids

4. privately → private

5. at the first 去掉 the

6. recite → recited

7. That → What

8. he → she

9. highly 后加 of

10. was → were

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章记叙了作者上周星期天在中国西南部的一个小镇一次很棒的经历。

1.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知locate在句中做非谓语动词，与逻辑主语town构成被动关系，故用过去分词。短语located in“位于”。故locating 改为 located。

2.考查连词。句意：我很幸运，被邀请作为一个评委的英语比赛的孩子。结合语境可知上下文为承接关系，应用and连接。故but 改为 and。

3.考查名词的数。kid为可数名词，前面没有冠词故应用复数形式。故kid 改为 kids。

4.考查形容词。修饰名词school应用形容词作定语。故privately 改为 private。

5.考查固定短语。固定短语at first“首先”，中间不需要冠词。故at the first 去掉 the。

6.考查动词时态。结合上文Then they sang songs可知为一般过去时。故recite 改为 recited。

7.考查连接词。句意：令人印象深刻的是一个女孩，她唱了一首名为《十只绿羊》的英文歌曲。本句为主语从句，从句中缺少主语，指代事情。故That 改为 What。

8.考查代词。结合上文可知是一个女孩演唱了歌曲，故应用人称代词she。故he 改为 she。

9.考查介词。固定短语think highly of“高度评价”。故highly 后加 of。

10.考查主谓一致。本句定语从句的主语为they，故谓语动词应用复数形式。故was 改为 were。