Question

假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他经常在手机上玩游戏，和父母发生了争吵，心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。内容包括：

1.表示理解；

2.指出玩手机游戏的危害（至少两点）；

3.建议向父母道歉。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Tom,

I am sorry to know that you often play games on your mobile phone. You quarrelled with your parents, which made you upset. I can understand you but you should pay attention to the damage of the mobile phone.

For one thing, not only can they harm your eyes, making you be short in sight, but also scientists have proved that they can also affect your brain as well. For another, it is a waste of time to use mobile phone too much, which will makes you addicted. Moreover, mobile phones can also spread some false information to cheat you. Last but not least, it can be a waste of energy and money.

As for your parents, you should make an apology to them.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他经常在手机上玩游戏，和父母发生了争吵，心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。内容包括：

1. 表示理解；2. 指出玩手机游戏的危害（至少两点）；3. 建议向父母道歉。人称使用第二、三人称。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：play games on your mobile phone (在手机上玩游戏)，quarrel with (和……争吵)，make an apology (道歉)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。