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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

One day on my way to home, I saw a boy hit by a motorcycle. I rushed to him rescue immediately. I lifted him gentle in my arms, stop a car and sent him to a nearby hospital. Know he only suffered minor injuries, I smiled in relief. This evening I got home very late, and my heart was full of joy and peace. Not until then did I understand meaning of the proverb: “Helping others are the source of happiness.” This may be one of the most unforgettable memory of my life.

 

删掉to him→his gentle→gently stop→stopped Know→Knowing This→That and→but understand后面加上the are→is memory→memories 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了一天,在我回家的路上我把一个被摩托车撞倒的小男孩送到了医院,虽然很晚才到家,但我心里感到很高兴,这件事让我明白了“帮助他人是快乐的源泉” 这句谚语的真正含义。 第一处:考查固定搭配。句意:一天,在我回家的路上,我看到一个男孩被摩托车撞了。on one’s way home表示“在某人回家的路上”,此处的home是副词,前面不能加to,故删掉to。 第二处:考查代词。句意:我立即赶来救他。修饰名词rescue用形容词性物主代词,故him改为his。 第三处:考查副词。句意:我轻轻地抱起他,拦下一辆车,把他送到附近的医院。修饰动词lifted用副词,故gentle改为gently。 第四处:考查时态。句意同上,and连接三个并列的动作,事情发生在过去,用一般过去时,故stop改为stopped。 第五处:考查非谓语动词。句意:知道他只是受了点轻伤,我如释重负地笑了。句子的谓语是smiled,此处使用非谓语动词,I与know之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,表示主动,用现在分词作原因状语,故Know改为Knowing。 第六处:考查代词。句意:那天晚上我很晚才到家,但我的心里充满了喜悦和平静。陈述的是几天前的事情,此处应该用“那天晚上”,故This改为That。 第七处:考查连词。句意同上,根据句意可知前后是转折而非并列关系,故and改为but。 第八处:考查冠词。句意:直到那时我才明白“帮助他人是快乐的源泉” 这句谚语的含义。此处特指“帮助他人是快乐的源泉” 这句谚语的含义,应该用定冠词the,故understand后面加the。 第九处:考查主谓一致。句意同上,动名词短语Helping others作主语,谓语动词用第三人称单数形式,故are改为is。 第十处:考查名词的数。句意:这也许是我一生中最难忘的回忆之一。one of后接可数名词复数,故memory改为memories。  
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