Question

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

George's mother was very poor and was sick. Instead of having bright fires in winter, she had nothing to burn but dry sticks, which George picked up from under the trees.

One fine day in July, his sick mother sent him to the woods. He was to stay there all day, to get as much wood as he could collect.

It was a bright, sunny day, and George worked very hard, so that by the time the sun was high, he was hot, and wished for a cool place where he might rest and eat his dinner. While he hunted for a spot about the bank he saw among the grass some fine, wild strawberries.

"How good these will be with my bread and butter!" thought George Lining his cap with leaves, he set to work eagerly to gather all he could find, and then seated himself by the river.

It was a pleasant place, and George felt happy and satisfied. He thought how much his mother would like to see him there, and to be there herself, instead of in her dark room in the village.

George thought of all this, and just as he was lifting the first strawberry to his mouth, he said to himself. "How much Mum would like these!" and he stopped, and put the strawberry back again. "Shall I save them for her?" said he, thinking how much they would refresh her, yet still looking at them with a longing(渴望的) eye.

"I will eat half , and take the other half to her", said he at last, and he divided them into two heaps(堆). But each heap looked so small, that he put them together again.

"I will only taste one." thought he. As he again lifted it to his mouth, he saw that he had taken the finest and he put it back. "I will keep them all for her." said he with great happiness, and he covered them up nicely ready to take home.

注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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He stood up and started to get more and more wood until the sun was beginning to sink.

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Just after he had thrown down his wood, he heard his mother's weak voice calling him from the next room.

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Answer

He stood up and started to get more and more wood until the sun was beginning to sink. George set out for home. He carried his cap filled with strawberries very carefully. How happy he felt then! He had all his strawberries for his sick mother. The nearer he came to his home, the less he wished to taste them. He arrived home before he knew it.

Just as he had thrown down his wood, he heard his mother calling him from the next room. “Is that you, George? I am glad you have come, for I am thirsty and I'm longing for some tea. Could you get some for me?” George ran to her and joyfully offered her all the wild strawberries. Seeing the wild strawberries, George's mother was very glad, tears running down her face. She said, “My boy, you didn't taste one of the strawberries and saved all for your sick mother. God will bless you for all this, my child.” At that moment, George and his mother were both filled with happiness.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。根据所给阅读材料的内容，在所给材料后续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。续写要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；每段的开头语已经写好了。

通过阅读所给文章可知，George的妈妈又穷又有病，整天呆在村子里的黑屋子里，George有一天去森林里砍柴，午饭的时候他发现了一些野草莓，在他想吃的时候想到了妈妈，这叫他无法下咽，他又想吃一半，留一半给妈妈，但又觉得太少了，他想只吃一颗，到了嘴边，他觉得他吃的是所有里面最大的一颗，就又放下来，最后George决定把采到的野草莓全部小心翼翼地带回家。

续写部分分为两段，开头都已经写好了，这就要求考生在开头设定的情况下展开相关内容，有点类似提纲。

第一段可以写George继续在森林里砍柴，他的心理活动，然后要到家时的心情。第二段可以写George回到家把野草莓给了妈妈，他给草莓时的动作，妈妈看到、拿到时的表情、动作和语言，最后升华文章的主旨：爱使家充满欢乐。