Question

假定你是班长李华，在寒假期间全班同学计划到孔子博物馆参观。请你给外教Mr. Henry写封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：

1. 发出邀请；

2. 活动安排；

3. 注意事项。

注意: 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:孔子博物馆 Confucius Museum

Dear Mr. Henry,

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer

参考范文一

Dear Mr. Henry,

Good news for you! An activity about paying a visit to Confucius Museum will be organized by our class over the coming winter holiday. I’m writing to invite you to join us.

As scheduled, the activity will be held on January 19. We are going to meet at our school gate at 7:30 am．We can experience Chinese culture and have a better knowledge of Confucius in the museum, where we can also see many ancient collections related to Confucius. Do take a thick coat with you, for it might be very cold that day. Besides, don’t forget to take your passport.

I’d appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply．

Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文二

Dear Mr. Henry,

How are you going recently? My class is planning to pay a visit to Confucius Museum on winter holiday. Learning that you have a great interest in Confucius, I’m writing to invite you to join us.

As scheduled, we’ll gather at our school gate at 7:30 a.m. on January 19. And then, we’ll take a bus to the museum. Through this visit, we will certainly have a better knowledge of Confucius. Besides, we can also have a close look at many ancient collections related to Confucius. Though admission is free, do remember to take your passport with you.

I’d appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply．

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一封邀请信。寒假期间全班同学计划到孔子博物馆参观。请你给外教Mr. Henry写封邮件，邀请他参加。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。根据写作提要，在寒假期间全班同学计划到孔子博物馆参观。请你给外教Mr. Henry写封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：1. 发出邀请；2. 活动安排；3. 注意事项。

动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：activity ， pay a visit to， organize ，winter holiday， invite you to join us， have a better knowledge of ，relate to ， accept my invitation， look forward to ，have a great interest in， take a bus to the museum， have a close look at， admission ，do remember to。

可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more， Besides，Moreover, Furthermore， In addition，as well as，not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。