Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Once there was an old woman. She had a lot of money. She was kind and generously. She always did something help the poor. At Christmas, she handed out food, that was made by herself, to the poor. She handed out a turkey leg but a potato to every homeless person he saw. The homeless people love her very much. One homeless men took out a penny that he wanted to give to her as for a gift. She felt good. She was determined to doing more, so she gave $ 50 with every homeless person she saw.

Answer

1.generously →generous 2.something后加to 3.that→ which 4.but→and 5.he→she 6.love→loved 7.men→man 8.for去掉 9.doing→ do 10. with→ to

【解析】

本文是记叙文，讲述了一个老太太慷慨地帮助穷人的故事。

1.考查形容词。and是并列连词，连接并列的形容词kind和generous作表语，故generously改为generous。

2.考查非谓语动词。此处是动词不定式作目的状语，to help the poor “为了帮助穷人”，故something后加to。

3.考查定语从句。that was made by herself是非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故that改为which。

4.考查并列连词。句意：她把火鸡腿和土豆分给每一个无家可归的人。句中a turkey leg 和 a potato是并列关系，不是转折关系，故 but改为and。

5.考查代词。句意：她把火鸡腿和土豆分给每一个她看到的无家可归的人。句子主语是she , 这里也是指“老太太”，故he改为she。

6.考查时态。全文是讲述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时，故love改为loved。

7.考查名词单复数。前面是one，意为“一个无家可归的人”，men应用单数，故men改为man。

8.考查介词。as意为：作为；as a gift “作为一个礼物”，不需介词for , 故for去掉 。

9.考查固定短语。短语be determined to do … “下决心做…”, 后接动词原形，故doing改为do。

10. 考查固定短语。短语 give sth. to sb. “把…给某人”，用介词to , 故with改为to。