Question

假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校将于下个月举办校园歌曲比赛（a Campus Song Competition）。请给你校外教Lisa写封邮件,邀请她做评审，内容包括：

1..写信目的；

2. 比赛时间、地点、要求和意义；

3. 希望她可以表演节目。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lisa,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Lisa,

I'm glad to tell you that our school will hold a Campus Song Competition. It is scheduled at 8 am on January 1st at the school hall to celebrate the New Year. I sincerely invite you to attend it and be a judge in the competition.

It's required that each class should choose the most talented singer to compete with students from other classes. Besides, competitors can only sing a campus song. The competition is held to enrich students' school life. I wish you can come. If you can sing a song at the end of the competition, it must be a big surprise for every student.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 写一封邀请信。

第一步：

审题: 邀请信

人称：第二、三人称

时态： 一般现在时、一般将来时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分写信目的，第二部分说明具体安排，

第三部分希望尽快回复。

要点：

1．写信目的：邀请外教Lisa来作歌曲比赛的评审

2．具体的安排

①比赛时间、地点：1月1日上午8时在学校大厅举行

②比赛要求：每班挑选有才华的歌手比赛，比赛者只能演唱校园歌曲。

③比赛意义：丰富学生校园生活

④希望Lisa可以表演节目

3．期待Lisa早日回复

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

hold ；be scheduled；the school hall ；celebrate the New Year；invite sb. to do…； attend；a judge in the competition; the most talented singer；compete with ；competitor；competition；enrich one’s school life

第三步：连词成句

1.Our school will hold a Campus Song Competition.

2.It is scheduled at 8 am on January 1st at the school hall.

3. I sincerely invite you to attend it and be a judge in the competition.

4.Each class should choose the most talented singer.

5.Competitors can only sing a campus song.

6.The competition is held to enrich students' school life.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning

Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides , moreover , apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile , in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but , however, although , though , yet , while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as , therefore, As a result , as a consequence , consequently , thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。