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请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个...

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号()

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;

2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hi Brad,

It’s so good to write to you again, after two years. Now I have graduated in Senior High School and had been admitted into a university in Shanghai. I feel very exciting to start my new life. Therefore, I am a little nervous, for my hometown, where is in Shanxi, is far from Shanghai. What I feel homesick there? And I don’t know that whether I can get on well with my roommates. Besides, I don’t know what to adapt to the new environment quick. What should I do to get preparing for my college life?

Looking forward to your early reply!

Yours

Edith

 

in →from had →have exciting →excited Therefore →However where →which What后加if I don’t know that whether删除that what →how quick →quickly preparing →prepared 【解析】 本文是一篇应用文。是Edith写给Brad的信,介绍自己被上海的大学录取,感到兴奋,但是去新的学校让他感到紧张。 1. 考查介词。短语graduate from意为“从…毕业”。故将in改成from。 2. 考查时态。这句话时间是now使用现在完成时。故将had改为have。 3. 考查形容词。句意:要开始新生活,我感到非常兴奋。ed形式形容词修饰人。故将exciting改成excited。 4. 考查副词。句意:要开始新生活,我感到非常兴奋。然而,我也有点紧张。前文说自己兴奋,下文说自己感到紧张,表示转折,用however。故将Therefore改为However。 5. 考查定语从句。句意:我有点紧张,因为我的家乡在山西,离伤害很远。先行词是hometown,定语从句缺少主语用which引导非限制性定语从句。故将where改为which。 6. 考查固定短语。what if意为如果…又怎样?故在What后加if。 7. 考查宾语从句。句意:我不知道我是否能跟室友相处很好。I don't know后接宾语从句表是否,故删掉that。 8. 考查疑问词。句意:我不知道怎样快速适应环境。疑问词+不定式作宾语,不定式内容不缺宾语,而是缺少表示方式的连接副词。故将what改成how。 9. 考查副词。副词修饰动词adapt to。故将quick改成quickly。 10. 考查过去分词。get prepared for意为为…做好准备。故将preparing改成prepared。  
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B.Exercising will help kids with ADHD focus better.

C.Exercising will help make math problems easier.

D.Exercising will help kids read more quickly.

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A.There is too much research into the older adults.

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C.The research about kids with ADHD is limited.

D.Exercise is not combined with traditional treatment.

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B.They need them to do some reading and math problems after school.

C.They need them to take a standard test of their ability to ignore distractions.

D.They need them to take standard tests of reading, spelling and math skills.

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D.He will be good to the press.

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