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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A recent survey shows most students communicate with their parents regularly, and there are still some who think it embarrassed to share their feelings with their parents. Actually, everyone should attach important to family communication, because not only does it strengthen the bond of the family but also bridge the gap between parents and children. In addition to, sharing your personal problems and emotions will great help reduce the pressure on you. As a result, our confidence will be built up. As for my family, we have special dinner together every Saturday evening, over that everyone present takes turns to sharing one problem and the others try to offer solutions. In this way the whole family can enjoy every single bit of life.

 

1.and→but; 2.embarrassed→embarrassing; 3.important→importance; 4.bridge→bridges; 5.to去掉; 6.great→greatly; 7.our→your; 8.have和special之间加a 9.that→which; 10.sharing→share; 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。文章主要论述了孩子多与家长交流的好处。 1.考查连词。句意;最近的研究表明:大部分学生定期跟家长交流,但是仍有一些学生觉得跟家长谈心太尴尬。这个并列句中,有些定期交流,有些觉得尴尬之间不是并列关系,而是转折。故and改为but。 2.考查形容词。这里think+宾语+宾语补足语,宾语it指代的是后面的不定式(跟家长谈心),表示的是一件事情,所以宾语补足语要用ing形容词,表示令人尴尬,ed形容词。故embarrassed改为embarrassing。 3.考查固定短语。attach importance to意为:重视,是固定短语。故important改为importance。 4.考查主谓一致。句意:(交流)不仅仅强化了家庭成员间的关系,也缩短了父母跟孩子之间距离。在这个not only…but also…连接的两个分句中,共用的是一个主要it,所以结合上文,bridge也要用第三人称单数形式。故bridge改为bridges。 5.考查固定短语。句意:而且,跟家长谈谈问题,谈谈情绪,会大大地帮助减少你们身上的压力。in addition,除此之外,在句中充当状语;而in addition to是介词短语,后面必须要接宾语,否则不完整。故to去掉。 6.考查副词。句意:而且,跟家长谈谈问题,谈谈情绪,会大大地帮助减少你们身上的压力。副词修饰动词,这里是修饰help这个动词,所以应用副词。故great改为greatly。 7.考查代词。句意:因此也会树立你的信心。根据上文,你们跟家长谈谈问题,谈谈情绪,会大大地帮助减少你们身上的压力,因此会树立你们的信心,而不是我们,前后人称要统一。故our改为your。 8.考查冠词。句意:至于我家,我们每个周六晚上会进行一场特别的宴会,在宴会期间,在场每个人会轮流谈一个问题,其他人帮助想办法解决。dinner在这里是可数名词,表示宴会,应使用不定冠词,special是以辅音音素开头的词,所以要加a。故在have和special之间加a。 9.考查介词+关系代词引导的定语从句。句意:至于我家,我们每个周六晚上会进行一场特别的宴会,在宴会期间,在场每个人会轮流谈一个问题,其他人帮助想办法解决。分析句子结构可知,这里是非限制性定语从句,而且是介词+关系代词引导的定语从句,先行词dinner在定语从句中作的介词over的宾语,应使用关系代词which引导。故that改为which。 10.考查非谓语动词和固定短语。句意:至于我家,我们每个周六晚上会进行一场特别的宴会,在宴会期间,在场每个人会轮流谈一个问题,其他人帮助想办法解决。在这句话中take turns (to do… )(轮流做……)是固定短语,后接不定式作宾语。故将sharing改为share。
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    Dinner and a movie was a two-part affair. But increasingly, the two have been combined into a single experience, allowing moviegoers to get fries and a beer while they watch the latest superhero blockbuster. Full-service theaters have become a Friday-night pastime for Americans.

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B.Uninspired remade films are the major complaint of audience.

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D.Full-service theaters provide a perfect experience for all audiences.

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D.To express their son’s admiration to Van Gogh.

2.What does the underlined phrase “God forbid” in Paragraph 4 mean?

A.May God forgive us.

B.It’s forbidden by God.

C.Even God can’t help it.

D.We hope it does not happen.

3.What’s Mount Dora city officials’ attitude towards the unique house?

A.Supportive. B.Disapproving.

C.Ambiguous. D.Understanding.

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A.“Starry Night” house in Florida arouses a heated debate.

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D.Homeowners battle for their “Starry Night” house in Florida.

 

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