Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing in the front of a store window. The little child had no shoes and his clothes are just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led him into the store. There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing. They walked back into the street, so the woman told the child to go home and has a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.

Answer

删除in后的the

are → were

passes → passing

her → him

warmly → warm

so → and

has → have

looked后加at

how → whether

child → children

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了一个善良的女士帮助一个小男孩的故事。

1. 考查冠词。结合语境可知，此处是指一个孩子站在橱窗的前面，应用in front of在……前面（指其中一方在另一方的外部），in the front of在……前面（指其中一方在另一方内部的前面）故删除in后的the.

2. 考查时态。本文讲述过去的事情，应用一般过去时，故将are改为were。

3. 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，此处是非谓语动词作后置定语, 逻辑主语woman和pass之间是主动关系，故用现在分词，a young woman passing by一个路过的年轻女士。故将passes改为passing。

4. 考查代词。结合上下文可知，此处是指女士给小男孩买鞋和衣服，应用him代指男孩，故将her改为him。

5. 考查形容词。此处应用形容词修饰名词clothing，故将warmly改为warm。

6. 考查并列连词。句意：他们走回那条街，女士叫这个孩子回家，过一个幸福的假期。结合句意可知，前后文是顺承关系，应用and连接，故将so改为and。

7. 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，此处用and连接两个不定式作为child的宾补，第二个不定式省略to，故将has改为have。

8. 考查介词。look是不及物动词，接宾语用look at，故在looked后加at。

9. 考查连词。句意：这个小男孩看着她问她是否是上帝。结合句意可知，此处应用whether引导宾语从句，故将how改为whether。

10. 考查名词的数。根据one of + 名词复数 可知此处应用child的复数形式，故将child改为children。