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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My friend Frank is one of the most amazing peoples I have ever met. He just never seemed to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpected difficulties. To everyone's surprised, he has never failed an exam. Frank believes that exams are just exams but that it is unnecessary worry about them all the time. He is an optimistic person by nature and I real admire his way of thinking. That makes me ashamed is that I am always nervous facing the exams. For an example, I can not concentrate to my studies before the exams. It is time to learn from her now.

 

peoples → people seemed → seems surprised → surprise but → and unnecessary后加to real → really That → What 删除example后的an to → on her → him 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。作者的朋友弗兰克是一个很优秀的人,作者很崇拜他,准备向他学习。 1. 考查名词单复数。句意:我的朋友弗兰克是我见过的最了不起的人之一。此处people指是指“人们”,没有复数形式。故将peoples改为people。 2. 考查时态。本文讲述的是作者朋友弗兰克的一般情况,因此应用一般现在时。故将seemed改为seems。 3. 考查固定短语。固定短语to one’s surprise。故将surprised改为surprise。 4. 考查连词。分析句子结构可知,本句 believe后面含有两个that引导的宾语从句,从句意来看,这两个宾语从句属于并列关系,不是转折关系,因此这里应该用and连接。故将but改为and。 5. 考查不定式。句意:弗兰克认为考试只是考试,没有必要一直担心考试。本句考查 it+be+形容词+to do sth.句型。故在unnecessary后加to。 6. 考查副词。句意:我真佩服他的思维方式。根据句子结构和句意可知,这里应使用副词,修饰动词 admire。故将real改为really。 7. 考查主语从句的引导词。从句子结构来看,makes me ashamed从句明显缺少主语,因此应考虑用what引导主语从句,并在句中作主语,that引导名词性从句时,只起连接作用,不做成分,故将That改为What。 8. 考查固定短语。固定短语for example“例如”。故删除example前的an。 9. 考查介词。句意:考试前我无法专心学习。固定短语concentrate on sth.“集中精力于某事”。故将to改为on。 10. 考查代词和逻辑关系。从上下文看,作者谈论的是其朋友弗兰克,且前面均用的是he,因此这里属于人称指代错误。故将her改为him。
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