Question

假定你是李华，你校近期将组织开展一次垃圾分类志愿者活动，请给你的英国留学生朋友Max写一封邮件，邀请他参加．内容包括：

1．活动时间及地点；

2．活动内容及目的；

参考词汇：垃圾分类： garbage classification

注意：1．词数 100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

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Answer

Dear Max，

In order to raise awareness of the protection of the environment， our school will organize a voluntary activity this Sunday morning．（高分句型一） I am writing to invite you to join us．（写信目的）

We will gather at the gate of Jinjiang Park at eight and do some voluntary work in groups． Activities will include putting up posters， telling the citizens the importance of protecting the environment and picking up rubbish in the park and do some garbage classification．（高分句型二） We hope to make our community a better place by working in our spare time． If you are interested and available， please meet us there on time． Don't forget to wear light clothes a nd bring some tools．（活动时间，地点及目的）

Looking forward to your reply．（期望）

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作，主要是写一封邀请信。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.提出邀请

2.介绍相关情况

1）此次活动的大体介绍。（introduction to this dance）

2）活动的时间及地点。（time & place）

3) 活动内容及目的。（activities & purpose）

3．表达期望。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

In order to; raise awareness of; voluntary activity; gather; voluntary work; put up posters; the importance of protecting the environment; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. In order to raise awareness of the protection of the environment， our school will organize a voluntary activity this Sunday morning．

2. I am writing to invite you to join us．

3. We will gather at the gate of Jinjiang Park at eight

4. And we will do some voluntary work in groups．

5. Activities will include putting up posters， telling the citizens the importance of protecting the environment and picking up rubbish in the park and do some garbage classification．

6. We hope to make our community a better place by working in our spare time．

7. Looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改