Question

第Ⅱ卷

第四部分：写作

第一节 短文改错（共10小题；

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Jack Green was the football coach at an American college. He was appointed to find good players, and they weren’t smart enough to be accepted.

One day, the coach has brought an excellent player to the director of the college and suggested the student allowed to enter without an examination. “Well,” the director said after thinking for a while, “I’d better ask you a few questions first.” Then the student was called for and asked some easier questions, but he didn’t know any of the answers. At last the director said, “Well, what is thirty – four minus two?” It was quite a long time when the student answered, “Thirty – three.” The director threw up his hands and looked at the coach disappointed, but the coach said, “Oh, please let him in, sir! He was only wrong by two comparing with all the others.”

Answer

1. the→a

2. and →but

3. 去掉has

4. student后加be或者being

5. you→him

6.for→in

7. easier →easy

8.when→before

9. disappointed →disappointedly

10. comparing → compared

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。短文叙述了一位大学主任选拔拔运动员的故事。

第一处：考查冠词。coach为可数名词，本句表示泛指，表示一名教练，且football首字母的发音为辅音因素。故将the改成a。

第二处：考查连词。分析句意可知，前后表示转折关系。故将and改成but。

第三处：考查时态。由“ one day” 可知，本句为一般过去时。故去掉has。

第四处：考查动名词/虚拟语气。 本句为suggest sb doing或者suggest that+sb （shoud）+动词原形的用法，且student与allow为被动关系。故将student后加be或者being。

第五处：考查代词。分析句意可知，主任要问这个运动员几个问题，所以ask后接him作宾语。故将you改成him。

第六处：考查固定短语。这个运动员被叫了进来，所以用be called in。故将for改成in。

第七处：考查形容词。问了几个容易的问题，所以用形容词的额原级。故将easier改成easy。

第八处：考查从属连词。It is/was +时间段+before....多长时间以后,才…….。符合句意。故将when改成before。

第九处：考查副词。disappointedly为副词修饰动词looked。故将disappointed改成disappointedly。

第十处：考查过去分词。be compared with“ 与…….对比”为固定短语。本句为过去分词形式。故将comparing改成compared。