假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, I, along with the rest of my grade, went on a 18-hour survival training trip. When we arrived in, we put up our tents before making lunch. Then we participated in team-building activity such as dragon boat racing or rock climbing. They were all extremely fun yet tiring. The most excited event was the boat racing, as I have never been in a dragon boat before. The thrilling feeling of riding over the waves will stay my mind forever. By the end of the day, they were all sweaty and exhausted. We packed up the next morning, take back with us our new created memories.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
About how to keep healthy, I’d like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that can we keep fit.
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If you have ever watched a movie that featured old Beijing,there is a good 1.(possible)that it contained a scene with a flock of pigeons flying over quadrangular dwellings (Siheyuan),2.( give) off a uniquely harmonic(和声的)buzzing sound as they flew by.That sound is 3. local residents remember when they think of old Beijing.Every city has 4.( it)unique sights and sounds, and the "sound of old Beijing" is the pigeon whistle.
Pigeon whistles (also called pigeon bells) are whistles that 5.( tie) on the tails of pigeons so that when they fly, the air that flows through the whistle creates a harmonic sound.Over 6. last several centuries, Beijing residents have liked to raise pigeons and let them soar through the sky every day. Regardless 7. whether it is a windy morning in spring 8. a cloudless day in late autumn, people can always see a flock of pigeons flying around in the sky and hear the beautiful sound they make while flying. Up until the 1950s, pigeon markets in Beijing were very 9.(promise).
But with the passing of time and advancement of urban development, fewer and fewer people in Beijing are raising pigeons.10.( consequent), the sight of pigeons flying around with their accompanying harmonic sound is becoming increasingly rare.
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第四部分:写作
第一节 短文改错(共10小题;
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jack Green was the football coach at an American college. He was appointed to find good players, and they weren’t smart enough to be accepted.
One day, the coach has brought an excellent player to the director of the college and suggested the student allowed to enter without an examination. “Well,” the director said after thinking for a while, “I’d better ask you a few questions first.” Then the student was called for and asked some easier questions, but he didn’t know any of the answers. At last the director said, “Well, what is thirty – four minus two?” It was quite a long time when the student answered, “Thirty – three.” The director threw up his hands and looked at the coach disappointed, but the coach said, “Oh, please let him in, sir! He was only wrong by two comparing with all the others.”
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有10处语言错误,每句中最多右两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏了符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Lily,
With New Year drawing near, I come to send you this potted orchid as a gift, only be told that you happened to be out. So I left you this note to oiler you some tips on how to attend to a plant.
The orchid, which it is known as a symbol of a real gentleman, are a kind of flower popular among Chinese. The orchid prefers loose soil, thus allow water, air and roots to pass through the soil free. This flower doesn't need too much water, so don’t water it too often, and its roots will rot. Cut off the dead leaf in time, especially those damaged by worms, in case they affect the healthy ones.
I sincerely hope this potted orchid can bring me joy, health and happiness. Happy New Year!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分.
As a typical student of Senior 3, I devote most time to learn each day, with different subject to study and lots of homework to do. In my spare time, I love watching TikTok videos, that are really amusing and always make me feel relaxed.
TikTok, also know as Douyin in China, allows users share 15﹣second videos. It is extremely popular and offer people a chance to show their talents. Many people have become the big stars since we shared videos on TikTok. I will also share funny videos in the future. Therefore, I've never thought of becoming famous. Instead, I just want to make others happily.