Question

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob在英语学习上给了你很多帮助。他上周发来电子邮件，询问你现在的英语学习情况。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 感谢帮助；

2. 英语学习的进步；

3. 目前面临的问题。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Bob,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Bob,

How’s everything? It’s great to hear from you, and many thanks for what you have done for my English studies.

You gave me much advice on how to improve my listening and writing skills, which helped me a lot. I practice every day, thus making rapid progress. To my great joy, I won the first prize in the English Writing Competition held last month in our school. However, I remain a bit weak in reading. I don’t think I have enough ability to understand long sentences and sometimes I do not seem to grasp the depth and content beyond the words. Would you mind giving me more help?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件给Bob。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

人称：以第一、第二人称为主

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时

结构：总分总法

要求：1. 感谢帮助；

2. 英语学习的进步；

3. 目前面临的问题。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

hear from；English studies；listening and writing skills；make rapid progress；to one’s great joy；the first prize；English Writing Competition；enough；grasp；depth；look forward to等

第三步：连词成句

1. It’s great to hear from you, and many thanks for what you have done for my English studies.

2. You gave me much advice on how to improve my listening and writing skills, which helped me a lot.

3. I practice every day, thus making rapid progress.

4. I won the first prize in the English Writing Competition held last month in our school.

5. I don’t think I have enough ability to understand long sentences and sometimes I do not seem to grasp the depth and content beyond the words.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：and

2.表转折对比关系：However

3.表因果关系：thus

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改