Question

假如你是李华。你的英国朋友Jack在网上看到一篇关于中国环境持续改善的报道，对此感到非常好奇，发来邮件询问你所在地的情况。请你根据以下内容写一封回信：

1.环境的变化；

2.所采取的措施；

3.个人感受。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Jack,

I am very glad to receive your letter about the environment in China. It is true that our environment has improved a lot in recent years.

I live in a small country in the west China. The environment we used to live in ten years ago was terrible and it was hard to believe. Wherever you were, whatever you did, you could hardly escape from pollution. The sky looked grey; the rivers became black; the grass was covered with plastic bags. You easily got your hair and shoes dirty while walking along the streets, and the air smelt terrible.

Realizing the importance of environment preservation, we took a lot of measures. we write letters to our friends on ordinary paper instead of sending cards, because 4,000 cards amount to one tree, and trees are important to better our environment. Moreover, we can encourage the government to punish the act of pollution and so on.

Now, the sky is blue again, the rivers become clean, and the grass is always green, we are now live a healthier and happier life. I am pleased with the environment now and I believe it will become better and better.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲作文。题干中给出了文章中应包含的三点内容，但是内容提示都比较简单，同学们写作时需要根据内容要点，结合自己的生活经历适当发挥。

第一步：审题：确定时态和人称。这封信主要是要求你作为李华向好友Jack就当地的环境变化情况作个介绍，所以时态应以一般过去时与一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

used to…（过去常常做……）；escape from pollution（远离污染）；be covered with…（被……覆盖）；take a lot of measures（采取很多措施）；environment preservation（环境保护）；amount to（等于）；punish the act of pollution（惩罚污染的行为）；a healthier and happier life（更健康、更开心的生活）等。

第三步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。

第四步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。