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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

“Smoking helps us think more better,” many people who smoke often say. Therefore, I’m afraid I can not agree them. I’m strong against smoking. First, smoking is bad for one’s healthy. People who smoke often develop or even die of different disease. Second, smoking polluted the air. People cannot work or study well in a room full of smoke. Third, it is a waste of money to smoke a lot. Every year, million of dollars are spent treat diseases caused by smoking. Smoking really does more harm than good, what can result in serious consequences. Students should not pick up this habit.

 

1. 去掉more;2. Therefore→However 3.在agree后面加with;4.strong→strongly;5.healthy→heath;6. disease→diseases;7. polluted→pollutes;8. million→millions;9. treat→treating;10. what→which 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。文章论述的是“吸烟有害将康,而并不是吸烟帮助我们更好地思考”。 1.考查比较级。此处more不能修饰比较级。故把better前的more去掉。 2.考查副词。句意:“吸烟帮助我们更好地思考,”许多吸烟的人经常说。然而,我恐怕不能同意他们的看法。根据can not agree可知,前后句是转折关系。故把Therefore改成However。 3.考查固定搭配。句意:“吸烟帮助我们更好地思考,”许多吸烟的人经常说。然而,我恐怕不能同意他们的看法。固定搭配:agree with sb.“同意某人的观点”。故在agree后面加with。 4.考查副词。句意:我强烈反对吸烟。此处是介词短语作表语,由副词来修饰。故把strong改成strongly。 5.考查名词。句意:吸烟有害健康。此处one’s是形容词性物主代词,修饰名词。故把healthy改成heath。 6.考查名词复数。句意:吸烟的人经常发展成甚至死于不同的疾病。根据different“不相同的”可知,后面用名词复数。故把disease改成diseases。 7.考查一般现在时态。句意:吸烟污染空气。此处指一种客观事实,句子用一般现在时态,且主语是动名词,所以谓语动词用单数第三人称形式,故把polluted改成pollutes。 8.考查固定搭配。句意:每年,数百万美元花在治疗吸烟引起的疾病上。固定搭配:millions of“数百万”。故million成为millions。 9.考查固定搭配。句意:每年,数百万美元花在治疗吸烟引起的疾病上。固定搭配:spend…(in) doing sth.“在做某事上花费……”。此处是被动语态,但结构不会变,仍然用动名词作宾语。故把treat改成treating。 10.考查非限制性定语从句。句意:吸烟确实弊大于利,会导致严重的后果。此处是前面整个句子做先行词,which引导非限制性定语从句,且what不能引导定语从句。故把what改成which。  
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