Question

书面表达

假如你是李华，最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告，请你根据下列要点提示写一封应聘信。

1.李华，女，18岁，身体健康。

2.擅长英语，口语流利。

3.性格外向，交际能力强。

注意：

1.词数120左右。

2.书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数。

3.可以适当拓展。

Dear Sir or Madame,

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old. I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. My advantages are as follows:

Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in summer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. Finally , I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teachers.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是李华，最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告，请你根据下列要点提示写一封应聘信。

1.李华，女，18岁，身体健康。

2.擅长英语，口语流利。

3.性格外向，交际能力强。

第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，写信目的和自我介绍。第二段，擅长英语，口语流利。性格外向，交际能力强。第三段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: in response to，be fit for ，speak English fluently, have no difficulty communicating with foreigner, be good at .

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: that的宾语从句 I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. It作形式主语I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Firstly, Secondly, Finally , As a result.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。