Question

为帮助你校英国留学生尽快适应在中国的学习和生活，学校国际部现面向全校学生招聘志愿者。假定你是李华，对此很感兴趣，请根据以下要点写一封应聘信。

内容要点：

1. 你的应聘理由；

2. 你的应聘优势；

3. 你的帮助计划。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear sir,

I saw your advertisement in the school paper this evening，and I wonder if you would consider me for a job as a volunteer who is willing to help English students studying in China to adjust themselves to their study and life as soon as possible.

  I am a sophomore in this university. I major in English. I will go abroad to study further next year. So I need an opportunity to improve myself. Besides, I prefer to show something about our country to foreigners, such as Chinese, Chinese customs and Chinese cultures. In the past 2 years， I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only have I passed CET-6and TEM4， but more important I can communicate with others freely in English。 My ability to write and speak English is out of question。I will take them to pay a visit to the local people and families, making them have a good understanding of Chinese life styles .As to their study, I will make a plan to help them learn how to learn Chinese and other subjects well.

Thank you very much for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 你的应聘理由；2. 你的应聘优势；3. 你的帮助计划。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时，兼用现在完成时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，说明要申请的岗位。第二段，你的应聘理由；你的应聘优势；你的帮助计划。第三段，期待回复。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: wonder ，consider，volunteer，sophomore ，opportunity， improve ，freely, prefer to do sth, Chinese, Chinese customs and Chinese cultures, CET-6and TEM4, communicate with sb, pay a visit to, the local people and families, have a good understanding of, Chinese life styles,be willing to do sth ,adjust oneself to …，major in，help sb to do sth.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: if 引导的宾语从句和who 引导的定语句I wonder if you would consider me for a job as a volunteer who is willing to help English students studying in China to adjust themselves to their study and life as soon as possible. not only …but also 引导的并列句Not only have I passed CET-6and TEM4， but more important I can communicate with others freely in English. 现在分词作伴随状语I will take them to pay a visit to the local people and families, making them have a good understanding of Chinese life styles.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Besides, Not only …but also, As to study.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。