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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I still remembered my working experience in a café last summer. One day, I entered into it to get a drink. However, what attracted my attentions was not the menu, but a notice said, “NOW HIRING”. I took look at the requirements but thought maybe I could have a try. On arriving home, I talked to my parents about get a part-time job in the café during the summer vacation and he strongly supported me. Determine to challenge myself, I went to the interview. Fortunate, I passed it and I was really proud of myself!

 

【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者去年夏天在咖啡馆的工作经历。 1.考查时态。句意:我还记得去年夏天在咖啡馆的工作经历。remember这个动作发生在现在,所以,应用一般现在时,主语是I,谓语动词用原形。故将remembered改为remember。 2.考查及物动词。句意:有一天,我进咖啡馆去喝一杯咖啡。enter为及物动词,后面直接跟名词作宾语。故将into去掉。 3.考查名词。句意:然而,吸引我注意的并不是菜单,而是一张写着“正在招聘”的通知。attention为不可数名词,没有复数形式。故将attentions改为attention。 4.考查非谓语动词或定语从句。句意:然而,吸引我注意的并不是菜单,而是一张写着“正在招聘”的通知。said意为“上面写着,显示着”,其与所修饰名词之间为主谓关系,可以使用现在分词短语作后置定语;此处也可以理解为定语从句作定语,先行词是a notice,连接词在定语从句中做主语,应使用关系代词that/which引导。故将said改为saying或在said前加that/which。 5.考查冠词。句意:我看了一下要求。take a look at为固定搭配,意为“看一看”。故在look前加a。 6.考查连词。句意:我看了一下要求,并且想也许我可以试试。根据句意可知,此处句间关系为并列关系,而非转折关系。故将but改为and。 7.考查动名词。句意:一到家,我就和父母商量暑假去咖啡厅打工的事,他们非常支持我。介词后要跟动名词作宾语。故get改为getting。 8.考查代词。句意:一到家,我就和父母商量暑假去咖啡厅打工的事,他们非常支持我。根据上下文可知,此处指代“my parents”,应使用代词的复数形式。故将he改为they。 9.考查形容词作状语。句意:决心挑战自己,我去面试了。表示主语的状态,用形容词作状语,determined意为“下定决心的”。故将Determine改为Determined。 10.考查副词。句意:幸运的是,我通过了考试,我真地为自己感到骄傲!副词修饰整个句子。故将Fortunate改为Fortunately。  
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