Question

假设你是晨光中学学生李华，你市正在开展“文明城市”（Building a Civilized City）主题活动，请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。

内容如下：1.指出本市存在的不文明现象；2.结合实际提出建议并发起倡议。

注意：

1.词数 100 左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头结尾已给出。

Dear friends,

I am writing this letter to

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear friends,

I am writing this letter to tell you that to practice socialist core values and stimulate civilized behaviors, we are making our city a civilized one, which is of great importance to us.

We can get along well with our citizens, but also study and live in a better and more harmonious environment. However, there are some bad behaviours in our city now. For example, some people are impolite and dishonest to others. Moreover, others throw litter everywhere, ignoring others’hard work. To achieve this goal and improve our quality, we must promote our environmental awareness and behave ourselves. Let's take action right now and we can make it.

Li Hua

【解析】

本文属于应用文。你市正在开展“文明城市”（Building a Civilized City）主题活动，要求考生结合内容提示写一则倡议书。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.指出本市存在的不文明现象；2.结合实际提出建议并发起倡议。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：make our city a civilized one， be is of great importance to us， get along well with our citizens， live in a better and more harmonious environment， impolite and dishonest ，throw litter everywhere，ignore others’ hard work， to achieve this goal， improve our quality， promote our environmental awareness ，behave ourselves， take action， make it。

可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then， Finally， In the end，At last， Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition， as well as， not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。