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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Peter,

Good news travels fast! I am glad to hear that you were admitted Yale University. Please accept my sincerely congratulations on your success.

I knew how hard you have been working for these years but, I am very proud of you for your success. I am sure that it is just my persistence and hard work which, leads to your current success. Just as the old saying go, “ No pains, no gains". I strongly believe that you will make a greater progress in your future studies and works.

At the end of my letter, I put my best wishes for you! And I look forward to see you before long.

Yours,

Lily

 

【解析】 这是一篇应用文。文章主要表达了作者对朋友被耶鲁大学录取的祝贺。 1. 考查介词。句意:听说你被耶鲁大学录取了,我很高兴。be admitted to/into为固定用法,意为“被……录取”。故应在admitted后加上to/into。 2. 考查形容词。句意:请接受我对你成功的衷心祝贺。分析句子可知,congratulations为名词,应用形容词来修饰。故把sincerely改为sincere。 3. 考查时态。句意:我知道你这些年来一直很努力。分析文章可知,全文时态为一般现在时,故此处的时态应与全文时态保持一致,表示一般事实情况。故把knew改为know。 4. 考查连词。句意:我知道你这些年来一直很努力,我为你的成功感到骄傲。分析句子可知,前后两句话为并列关系,而不是转折关系。故把but改为and。 5. 考查人称代词。句意:我相信,正是你的坚持和努力,才导致了你现在的成功。分析文章可知,是作者的朋友被耶鲁大学录取,故应是她的坚持和努力。故把my改为your。 6. 考查强调句。句意:我相信,正是你的坚持和努力,才导致了你现在的成功。分析句子可知,此处是一个强调句,强调“你的坚持和努力”,故应用that。故把which改为that。 7. 考查固定用法。句意:正如老话所说:“不劳无获”。as the old saying goes为固定用法,意为“正如老话所说”。故把go改为goes。 8. 考查冠词。句意:我坚信你今后的学习和工作会有更大的进步。progress为不可数名词,不能用a修饰。故去掉a。 9. 考查名词。句意:我坚信你今后的学习和工作会有更大的进步。work当“工作”讲为不可数名词,故没有复数形式。故把works改为work。 10. 考查固定搭配。句意:我期待不久能见到你。look forward to doing为固定用法。故把see改为seeing。  
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