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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划- .横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A terrible thing was happened in a zoo yesterday. A man was biting seriously by a tiger. The public felt frightened. Later word came the man tried to avoid buy tickets and went into the dangerous area in the zoo. This made the tiger angrily and it attacked him. Animals had their own nature. Once they are in threat, they will do terrible things. Therefore, visitors should behave them and obey the rules of the zoo. But still a lot of people throw food to animals, what does harm to their healths. It is our duty to protect animals.

 

1. 去掉was;2.biting→bitten; 3.came后面加that;4.buy→buying; 5.angrily→angry; 6.had→have; 7.in→under; 8.them→themselves;9.what→which;10.healths→health 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述的是动物园老虎伤人的事故。告诫游客应该行为检点,遵守动物园的各项规定。 1.考查不及物动词。动词happen“发生”时不及物动词,没有被动语态,故把happened前的was去掉。 2.考查一般过去时态的被动语态。句意:一个人被老虎咬得很严重。此处句子主语A man和谓语动词bite之间是被动关系,是一般过去时态的被动语态,故把biting改成bitten。 3.考查同位语从句。句意:后来有消息说,这名男子试图不买票,进入了动物园的危险区域。此处word“消息”,后面是word的具体内容,是一个完整的句子,句子不缺少任何成分,连接代词that引导同位语从句时,只起引导作用,所以符合题意,故在came后面加that。 4.考查动名词作宾语。句意:后来有消息说,这名男子试图不买票,进入了动物园的危险区域。动词avoid后面用动名词作宾语,故把buy改成buying。 5.考查形容词作宾语补足语。句意:这让老虎很生气,它攻击了他。固定句型:make+宾语+宾语补足语(形容词)。此处是形容词作宾语补足语,故把angrily改成angry。 6.考查一般现在时态。句意:动物有它们自己的本性。此处指一种客观事实,所以句子用一般现在时态,且主语是Animals,是复数形式,故把.had改成have。 7.考查介词用法。句意:一旦他们受到威胁,他们会做可怕的事情。固定词组:under threat“受到威胁”。故把in改成under。 8.考查反身代词。句意:因此,游客应该举止规矩,遵守动物园的各项规定。固定搭配:behave oneself“举止规矩”。此处用反身代词作宾语,故把them改成themselves。 9.考查非限制性定语从句。句意:但是仍然有很多人把食物扔给动物,这对他们的健康有害。此处是前面整个句子作先行词,用which引导非限制性定语从句,故把what改成which。 10.考查不可数名词。句意:但是仍然有很多人把食物扔给动物,这对他们的健康有害。名词health是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故把healths改成health。  
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