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I like travelling and my dream of visit Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holiday this year. In October 1st, I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents, there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feel extremely excited. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that "One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero." Although I was tired, I really had a fun.
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If it weren't for the ninth BRICS Summit (金砖峰会) held in Xiamen last year, many people would probably never have realized 1. rich the culture in Fujian is.
The welcoming ceremony displayed the traditional local culture, including2. (vary) art forms such as children's folk rhymes and Hui'an women dances. However, one of the most 3.(impression) performances was Nanyin, which is translated as “the music in the south”. Nanyin is a type of musical performance art based on southern Fujian dialects. 4. (general) considered to date back to the Song Dynasty, Nanyin has been called precious treasure of China's music history and is5.(old) traditional music form in China today. When6. (interview), a Nanyin performer said, “Some people say such old music isn't necessary or suitable7.modern people, but I don't think8.. As a matter of fact, Nanyin can be a social communication break for modern people who9.(feed) up with the fast-paced lifestyle.” Another performer added, “10.(get) involved in Nanyin performance makes me remain young. Anyway, who can be older than this kind of 1000-year-old music? ”
My 20-year-old daughter, Allison, living in Philadelphia, sent me a text the other day："I need socks and shampoo.”She was actually asking me to______those items for her, but I ______she was playing a cell phone game. I decide not to be a helicopter(直升机)______,because experience as a mother and professor has taught me how______that can result.
__, I prefer a more hands-off approach. From the time Allison turned 18, I no longer had any____ to know her work and life schedule.
But that's not what I ___ at Drexel University where I teach. Most of my students talk to their __ three times a day or more. One student's mother called because she didn't ____ from him for a few days. He was in the library so he______"hello". She doubted that he was drinking, and insisted on asking him to______a picture of himself. Holding a newspaper with that day's ____，he took a picture and sent it to his mother in order to ___ that he wasn't telling a lie.
I've always treated my students as independent beings. I tell them on the first day that I will not follow up with them on missing____or assignments. I am getting them to become independent thinkers, and take responsibility for their ____.
But their parents don't______them like me. I know a mother. She supervises(监督)her son too much. She hopes he will walk by the______，so that she can know what he is doing. Another mother checks her son's credit card daily. However, I never do that. My daughters only come to me with____things that need my decision, and I think that's because I give them space.
Many parents try to find if their kids are______from them. But we have to learn to respect boundaries(界限)，even when technology is so ____. So I am going to do my best not to be a helicopter parent.
1.A.donate B.check C.prepare D.receive
2.A.thought B.managed C.decided D.remembered
3.A.customer B.mother C.trainer D.boss
4.A.normally B.badly C.simply D.amazingly
5.A.Instead B.Besides C.Otherwise D.Still
6.A.way B.courage C.power D.desire
7.A.do B.achieve C.see D.predict
8.A.professors B.friends C.parents D.classmates
9.A.learn B.hear C.escape D.judge
10.A.waved B.meant C.added D.whispered
11.A.gain B.gather C.draw D.take
12.A.date B.picture C.name D.plan
13.A.apologize B.comment C.prove D.preserve
14.A.themes B.nutrition C.mineral D.classes
15.A.secrets B.choices C.skills D.humour
16.A.treat B.protect C.change D.employ
17.A.school B.door C.camera D.road
18.A.impressive B.ordinary C.obvious D.important
19.A.hiding B.suffering C.developing D.benefiting
20.A.valuable B.powerful C.harmful D.limited
Four Habits to Help You Succeed
Nobody would like to experience failure. We all want to succeed. For those who have tried and failed, success seems difficult to understand. 1.
• Know your values.
Finding your values is in line with creating motivation.2.Pick a handful of things and write them down. Remind yourself of your values every day and reflect on whether you are honoring those values through your work.
• 3.
Choose one goal to start something large enough that will give you a sense of achievement, while adjusting well to your values. If you want to achieve your goal, focus is the key here. 4.If you perform many tasks at a time, you might never finish your projects because they will take far too long.
• Set a time for success.
Set a date for success. Know when you hope to realize your goal.5.By setting a time limit, you are making the process realistic.
• Don’t give up because of failure.
Failure can’t be avoided when you take risks. By its very definition, the desire to succeed means you are risking failure. Many people tend to give up far too early. Don’t fall into this trap! Use failure. Treat it as a good thing, and go on.
A. Make the right decision.
B. Pick a goal and focus on it .
C. The more focused you are on one goal, the higher chance you have of success.
D. Keep it realistic, while not giving yourself too much time.
E. I have made a list of four habits to help you set goals and realize them.
F. Sit and reflect on what you value most.
G. Push yourself to be courageous, and take that next step.
Vinegar is great. It makes salad, fries and dumplings taste better, and you can even clean your windows with it. And now, according to scientists, it may even help the planet’s population survive climate change.
Researchers from the RIKEN Center for Sustainable Resource Science (CSRS) in Japan have found that growing plants in vinegar makes them more resistant to droughts. This could mean that in the future, worries about climate change affecting the world’s supply of food will be much lower.
The discovery was made after the researchers studied the Arabidopsis, a plant known for its ability to survive in dry weather. It was found that when the plant was placed in drought-like conditions, it produced a chemical called acetate(醋酸盐)—the main component of vinegar.
After discovering this, the scientists experimented further by adding acetate to the soil of other plants, and they stopped giving them water completely. After leaving the plants for 14 days, they found that the ones treated with acetate had survived, while the untreated plants had dried up and died. It’s hoped that this simple method of survival could soon be used to help farmers in dry countries keep their crops alive.
Jong Myong Kim, co-author of the study, tells Popular Science magazine that he’s already been in touch with people all over the world who are interested in trying this simple and cost-effective method out for themselves from flower growing companies to amateur gardeners. Although at this point keeping thirsty plants alive isn’t as easy as just pouring vinegar over them, Kim says he and his team are working on making the process as simple as possible. “Now we are trying to cooperate with some farmers, and also some companies, to make a method to apply this system,” he says.
And for those of us who always forget to ask our neighbors to water our plants when we go away, hopefully this means the end of returning home from a trip to find our favorite flowers have died.
1.What is mentioned as a feature of the Arabidopsis?
A. It produces acetate in wet conditions. B. It is mainly composed of acetate.
C. It can survive in nowhere but desert. D. It can be tolerant of drought.
2.The scientists experimented further by adding acetate to the soil of other plants to _______.
A. find a simple way of keeping the crops of farmers alive
B. add acetate to the soil of other plants to stop watering
C. check the effectiveness of the acetate to resist drought
D. treat the dried-up plants by adding acetate to them
3.What is the author’s attitude to the discovery?
A. Objective. B. Unsupportive.
C. Indifferent. D. Optimistic.
4.What does the text mainly tell the readers?
A. Vinegar May End Hunger B. Vinegar Keeps Plants Living Forever
C. How to Survive Climate Change D. Plants Need Water
A year back I received a full scholarship to attend the University of San Francisco. All of my hard work had paid off. My mom had spent a lot in my attending a private high school, so I made sure to push myself： I volunteered, got involved in various clubs, and graduated with honors. I was so excited to start a new chapter(篇章)of my life. I had totally packed two weeks before it was time to leave.
Soon enough, the big day came, but it wasn't like what I had thought. The first two weeks were the most difficult days of my entire life. Every night I would cry myself to sleep. I was so homesick and I didn't know how to deal with my broken heart. To distract myself, I threw myself into my studies and I applied for a ton of jobs. In any remaining free time, I started forcing myself to the gym. I wanted to keep every part of my day busy so I wouldn't think how lonely I felt.
Soon after, I began to limit food，and then I became worse. Finally, I went to see a doctor. When the doctor weighed me, I was crazy about the number of my weight. So I continued to lower my goal, and convinced that controlling this number was the solution for my homesickness. But when I was told that I had no choice but to spend time on my studies. I quickly started recovery in my mind.
How could I do? I told myself that school was what I was best at. I decided to get rid of my homesickness and took exercise actively. My first term of college had passed by at last and I had gotten straight A's. That's why I want to share my story－to help other students feel less lonely.
1.How was the author during the two weeks before she left for the college?
A.She was as normal as before.
B.She couldn't wait to leave for the college.
C.She was afraid to leave her home.
D.She didn't enjoy her mother's company.
2.What is the author's problem at the beginning of studying in the university?
A.Her weight. B.Her bad study habit.
C.Her diet. D.Her homesickness.
3.Which can best replace the underlined phrase "distract myself" in paragraph 2?
A.achieve my dream B.improve my studies
C.take my attention away D.earn money by myself
4.What is the main purpose of the author's writing the passage?
A.To look back at her past life. B.To help girls to lose weight.
C.To increase her own confidence. D.To help lonely college students.
