Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

My friend and I always played outdoor when we were young. During spring rains, we climbed up to our comfort tree house and played cards. Then in the amused autumn, we rolled around in the orange leaf. This all end one day, when my friend received video game player for his birthday. In the begin, he sometimes invited me over to play with him. But this began to happen less and less, because of his house was small, and his mother didn’t like visitors. Now we never see each another, as he is always played his video games. I miss my friend.

Answer

【解析】考查副词。注意outdoor是形容词，这里需要用副词。句意：当我们的年轻的时候，我和我的朋友总是在户外玩。故将outdoor改为outdoors。

考查形容词。修饰名词tree house前用形容词修饰。句意：我们爬上我们舒适的树窝打牌。故将comfort改为comfortable。

考查非谓语动词。修饰物autumn，用现在分词amusing，表示“有趣的，好玩的”。句意：在好玩的秋天，我们在橘黄色的树叶里打滚。故将amused改为amusing。

考查名词。这里名词leaf为可数名词，故用复数形式。句意：我们在橘黄色的树叶里打滚。故将leaf改为leaves。

考查时态。根据句意可知，这里是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。句意：一天，这一切都结束了。故将end改为ended。

考查冠词。名词video game player是可数名词，故在前加不定冠词a。句意：我的朋友收到了一个游戏机作为他的生日礼物。故在video game player前加a。

考查短语固定搭配。在起初in the beginning。句意：刚开始，他有时邀请我和他一起玩。故begin改为beginning。

考查副词。因为because of后只能接名词或动名词，不可接句子。句意：因为他的房子小。故将of去掉。

考查短语固定搭配。短语each other彼此。句意：现在我们彼此不再见面。故将another改为other。

考查时态。根据always可知，这里用playing。句意：他总是玩游戏。故将play改为playing。