Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（  ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Life is full of variously experiences, some of them are unforgettable. I still remember the hiking experiences with my classmates for 16 kilometers a year later. That summer day, we set off early in the morning, think it would be a great fun to walk for so long a distance. However, with the weather getting hotter and hotter, I found their legs heavier and heavier. Worse still, my feet began bleeding because being pressed against the shoes a long time. At one point, I even wanted to give up. But I manage to drag the rest of the way to the destination. Though not pleasant, this journey was impressive or rewarding. I have learned that life is a long journey like this. No matter what happens, we should never give up.

Answer

1.variously→various 2.them→which 3.experiences→experience

4. later→ago 5.think→thinking 6.great前面的a去掉 7.their→my

8.because 后加of 9.manage→managed 10.or→and

【解析】

本文是记叙文，讲述了作者一年前和同学一起徒步旅行的一次难忘的经历。

1. 考查形容词。修饰名词experiences应该用形容词，variously是副词，故variously改为various。

2. 考查非限制性定语从句。从句前面有逗号，是非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词experiences，指物，介词后面用which。故them改为which。

3. 考查名词。句意：我仍然记得一年前和同学一起徒步旅行16公里的经历。experience表示“经历”是可数名词；根据句意，此处指“一次经历”，应该用单数。故experiences改为experience。

4. 考查副词。a year later意为“一年后”；短文叙述的是去年和同学一起去远足的经历，根据句意，应为“一年前”；a year ago意为“一年前”。故later改为ago。

5.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构，主句为we set off；think的动作和主句谓语动词的动作set off同时发生，用现在分词作伴随状语。故think改为thinking。

6. 考查名词。fun是不可数名词，前面不要冠词a。故去掉great前面的a。

7. 考查代词。句意：我发现自己的腿越来越沉重了。主语是I，用相应的形容词性物主代词my，故their改为my。

8. 考查固定短语。because 后接从句；being pressed against the shoes是动名词短语，应用because of 后接动名词作宾语。故because 后加of。

9. 考查时态。上文时间状语是That summer day，整篇文章叙述的是过去的事情，用一般过去时，故manage改为managed。

10. 考查连词。句意：虽然旅途并不愉快，但却令人印象深刻，收获颇丰。根据句意，应为 “既印象深刻又收获颇丰”， 应用连词and，意为 “和，又”。故or改为and。