Question

假如你是李华，在英国某中学就读。你校准备举办以”多彩世界文化”为主题的活动周。请给学生会主席Tom写封信，申请成为志愿者。

信的内容如下:

1.个人优势:英语、性格等;

2.参加目的:

1): 宣传中国、了解世界;

2)锻炼自我。

注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

I am glad to know that the activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear David,

I am glad to know that the activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.

I am eager to be a member of it.

To begin with, as an outgoing boy, I am good at communicating with others. Secondly, I can speak fluent English and express myself clearly. What’s more，through the activity, not only can I make more friends but build up my character. I think it’s my duty to be able to introduce China to other friends and my honor to understand other cultures at the same time. Hopefully, I can take part in the activity.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文体裁的提纲类写作，要求考生写一封书信，在信中写明：成为志愿者的个人优势：英语、性格等；参加“多彩世界文化”活动周目的1)宣传中国、了解世界；

2)锻炼自我。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文——书信。

要点：1.想做“多彩世界文化”活动周的志愿者；2.成为志愿者的个人优势：英语、性格等；3.参加“多彩世界文化”活动周目的：宣传中国、了解世界；锻炼自我。

结构：总分总。

第二步：列提纲

一、框架1、信件一开始就开宗明义，说明知道学校的“多彩世界文化”活动周就要开始了，想当活动的自愿者。

2、详细谈成为志愿者的优势：1）性格外向，善于和人交流；2）英语水平较高，口语流利；。

3、参加“多彩世界文化”活动周的目的：1）宣传中国，2）了解世界，3）交朋友，锻炼自己。