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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

There are times in our lives that we may feel as if we need to walk away from everything. We are tired of trying so hard to work towards our fixing goal in life. Life seems to have become too complex to bear it. It is for these times in our lives that we need to remind ourselves that this will pass. We have joy, love or laughter in our lives which we had simply lost sight of.

There is nothing wrong with taking a step back. Give ourselves the time to rest and relax may be all we need to return to our normal activity. We'll then work energetic with new sense of commitment to our best life.

 

1.that→when;2.fixing→fixed;3.去掉it;4.for→at;5.or→and;6.had→have;7.Give→Giving;8.activity→activities;9.energetic→energetically;10.new前加a。 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。我们在生活中为了实现人生目标而不断努力,但有时会很累,在这个时候,我们需寻找生活中的喜悦,爱和欢笑,给自己时间休息和放松,这样我们的生活会越来越美好。 1.考查定语从句。句意:在我们的生活中,有时我们会觉得好像我们需要远离一切。此处是定语从句,修饰先行词times,关系词在定语从句中作时间状语,因此应使用关系副词when引导定语从句。故将that改为when。 2.考查形容词。句意:我们厌倦了如此努力地朝着人生的固定目标前进。分析可知,goal(目标)和fix(确定)之间为动宾关系,使用过去分词可以体现这种关系,此时fixed可以作为形容词,意为“固定的;不变的” ,修饰goal作定语。故将fixing改为fixed。 3.考查及物动词。句意:生活似乎变得太复杂让我们无法承受。此句型是一个简单句,句中主语同时还作不定式的宾语,即life就是bear的宾语,所以bear后面不能出现it。故去掉it。 4.考查介词。句意:在我们生活中的这些时候,我们需要提醒自己,这将会过去的。times与at连用,表示“在这些时候”。这里是一个强调句,它的基本结构:It is (was)+被强调部分(主语、宾语或状语)+that (who)...,被强调的是状语at these times in our lives。故将for改为at。 5.考查并列连词。句意:我们的生活充满了喜悦,爱和欢笑,这是我们没有看到的。这里的joy、love、laughter不是选择关系,而是并列关系。故将or 改为and。 6.考查时态。句意: 我们在生活中充满了喜悦,爱和欢笑,这是我们没有看到的。从句描述的是从过去到现在的情况,应使用现在完成时,而不是过去完成时。主语为we , 故将had改为have。 7.考查动名词。句意:给自己时间休息和放松可能是我们回到正常生活所需要的。分析句子结构可知,谓语动词may be之前为主语,应使用动名词作主语。故将Give改为Giving。 8.考查名词复数。句意:给自己时间休息和放松可能是我们回到正常生活所需要的。activity(活动)为可数名词,本句中指多种活动,需要变复数。故将activity改为activities。 9.考查副词。句意:然后,我们带着对美好生活的新的承诺充满活力地工作。energetic(精力充沛的)是形容词,应使用它的副词修饰动词work作状语,故将 energetic改为energetically。 10.考查冠词。句意:然后,我们将以一种全新的、对最佳生活的承诺感,精力充沛地工作。a sense of是固定搭配, 意为“一种…...的感觉 ”,new是以辅音音素开头的单词,故在new前加a。  
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