Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I live in a peacefully village in the countryside where we have many friendly neighbors. Several day ago, a heavy rain hit the surrounding region. Several dams in the upper reaches of the river was broken through, cause a flood in the river nearby. Two bridges were also washed away. When a flood drew back, many big fish were trapped in the river. They had raised in the dams. Every day, one of their neighbors went to catch up fish with a net.

Yesterday, the neighbor came to give us four big fresh fish, that had been frozen in his fridge. We had fish soup for lunch that day. What delicious!

Answer

1. peacefully→peaceful

2. day→days

3. was→were

4. cause→causing

5. a→the

6. raised前面加been

7. their→our

8.去掉up

9. that→which

10. What→How

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章介绍了作者村子发洪水，友好的邻居给作者送鱼的故事。

1.考查形容词。此处修饰名词village 应用形容词peaceful。故peacefully改为peaceful。

2.考查名词的数。此处days是名词复数，表示泛指，由前面的several可知应用复数形式。故day改为days。

3.考查主谓一致。此处句子主语是名词复数形式dams，谓语应用复数形式。故was改为were。

4.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知cause在句中做非谓语动词，表示“自然而然”的结果应用动词的-ing形式causing。故cause改为causing。

5.考查冠词。句意：洪水退去时，许多大鱼被困在河里。此处the是定冠词，此处表示特指这场洪水。故a改为the。

6.考查被动语态。本句中主语与谓语动词构成被动关系，且表示“过去的过去”应用过去完成时的被动语态。故raised前面加been。

7.考查代词。句意：每天，我们的一个邻居都去用网捕鱼。此处指的是“我们的邻居们”。故their改为our。

8. 考查副词。此处catch是及物动词，意思是“抓住”，不需要与up连用。故去掉up。

9.考查定语从句。句意：昨天，邻居来给我们四条新鲜的大鱼，这些鱼已经被冷冻在他的冰箱里了。本句为此处为非限制性定语从句修饰先行词four big fresh fish，且先行词在从句中做主语，应用关系代词which。故that改为which。

10.考查感叹句。句意：多么美味啊！此处how引导的是感叹句，how用来感叹形容词delicious；而what则用来感叹名词。故What改为How。