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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉

修改在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Courage is one of the thing I wish I could possess. I become nervous as soon as I am asking to speak in the public. To honest, my heart always pounds so hard before I go on stage which I have to take deep breaths many times.I still remember there were times when I gave up easy just because I was afraid to fail. I talk to a friend about my feelings and he encouraged me to presenting things on stage more often. To her delight, I'm getting better at it! I hope one day I can succeed on having the courage to do everything I want.

 

第1处: thing→things 第2处: asking→asked 第3处:去掉 in the public 中的 the 第4处: to honest 中间加 be 第5处: which→that 第6处: easy→easily 第7处: talk→talked 第8处: presenting→present 第9处: her→my 第10 处:on→in 【解析】 本文是记叙文,讲述了作者最初在公开场合说话的时候会很紧张。在朋友的鼓励下作者慢慢地有了勇气,敢于在公开场合讲话。 1.考查名词。表示“……之一”用“one of +可数名词的复数”,因此thing应该用复数形式things。故 thing改为things。 2. 考查被动语态。句意:当要我在公共场合讲话时候我就很紧张。ask和主语I之间为被动关系,应该用一般现在时的被动语态,故asking改为asked。 3.考查固定短语。短语“公开地”in public,故去掉 in the public 中的 the。 4.考查固定短语。短语“说实话,老实说”to be honest, 常用作插入语。故 to honest 中间加 be。 5.考查状语从句。句意:我在上台之前,我的心总是砰砰直跳,以至于要多次地深呼吸。前面有so hard ,因此是“so…that”结构,意为“如此……以致……”。故which改为that。 6. 考查副词。修饰动词短语gave up应该用副词,故easy改为easily。 7. 考查时态。这里是讲述过去发生的事情,根据下一句he encouraged me的时态,talk应该用一般过去时。故talk改为talked。 8. 考查非谓语动词。短语“鼓励某人做……”encourage sb.to do …, 后接不定式做宾语补足语。故presenting改为present。 9. 考查代词。上文叙述的是“我”的经历,根据句意,应该是“使我高兴的是”,故her改为my。 10. 考查固定短语。短语“在……方面成功”succeed in doing…,故on改为in。  
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