Question

假定你是李华,你的同学Jack来自英国,请根据以下写作要点写一篇周记记述你和家人与Jack共度中秋节的经历。

写作要点：

1.活动策划；

2.活动的内容；

3.你的感想。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Answer

August 15th was the Mid-Autumn Festival. To help Jack better understand our Chinese culture, I held a party with my classmate Jack and my family for the special day. On the afternoon of lunar August 15th ,I bought various moon-cakes as well as some fruits and nuts.

Night fell. We went outside into the yard, where we sat on the grass, enjoying the moon cakes while admiring the biggest and brightest moon. I told some beautiful legends of the origin of the festival. He was amazed. I also sang songs for the festival and we had some photos taken together. We enjoyed the night very much and I believe Jack had a great time.

What an unforgettable experience!

【解析】

本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇关于中秋节的周记。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇周记：假定你是李华,你的同学Jack来自英国,请根据以下写作要点写一篇周记记述你和家人与Jack共度中秋节的经历。写作要点：1.活动策划；

2.活动的内容；3.你的感想。时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； Mid-Autumn Festival（中秋节），culture（文化），moon-cakes（月饼），origin（起源），legend（传说），experience（经历）及unforgettable（难忘的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。