Question

假如你是李华，你的朋友王昆在英语学习方面遇到了困难，写邮件向你寻求帮助。现在，你给他回一封邮件，给他一些有益的建议。要点如下：

1. 抓住机会练习口语。 2. 大量阅读英语文章。 3. 用英语写邮件。

注意：1. 适当发挥，使上下文连贯。

2. 词数：100单词左右。

3. 开头已经给出，不计算在词数之内。

Dear Wang Kun,

I’m sorry to know that you have some trouble in learning English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Wang Kun,

I’m sorry to know that you have some trouble in learning English. Here, I’d like to give you some advice.

First, take every opportunity to practice your spoken English. You can join an English club in your school and communicate with other members in English when possible. If you keep on, I’m sure your oral English will become more fluent.

Secondly, read in English as much as you can. In this way, you can build up your vocabulary and understand the English culture better.

Finally, write to your friends or pen-pals in English. When writing, try to make use of what you have learnt to make the sentences correct. It won’t be long before you can use the language freely to express yourself.

Hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 写一封建议信。

第一步：

审题：邮件 建议信

人称：第二人称

时态： 一般现在时

结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分得知王昆的困难，愿意提出建议，第二部分说明具体的建议，第三部分希望建议对王昆有帮助。

要点：

1. 得知王昆在英语学习方面的困难，愿意提出建议

2．具体的建议

①多练习口语：加入英语俱乐部，与他人多用英语交流

②大量阅读英语，增加词汇量

③给朋友用英语写信

3．希望建议对王昆有帮助

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

have trouble in doing…；learn English；give sb. advice；take opportunity to do…；practice spoken English；join an English club；communicate with；keep on；fluent；

build up vocabulary；write to sb.；make use of；make the sentences correct；express oneself；suggestion；be helpful to

第三步：连词成句

1.You have some trouble in learning English.

2. I’d like to give you some advice.

3.Take every opportunity to practice your spoken English.

4.You can join an English club in your school and communicate with other members in English

5. Your oral English will become more fluent.

6.You can build up your vocabulary and understand the English culture better.

7.Try to make use of what you have learnt to make the sentences correct.

8.It won’t be long before you can use the language freely to express yourself.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

表示时间顺序： First of all; to begin/start with, in the beginning

Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。