假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I watched the amazed FIVB Women’s Volleyball World Cup on TV. I jumped with joy as the Chinese team win the championship with eleven straight victory. The success is a timely but inspiring birthday gift to our country. Besides, it makes I understand the spirit of the Chinese women’s volleyball team--never give up, particular in difficult situations. This spirit dates back to early 1980s. At this time, young Lang Ping attracted the entire nation's attention with her excellent performances on the court. Ever since then, almost four decades has been witnessed the rise and fall of the Chinese team. However, the spirit has inspired one generation to another, both within the team and across the country.
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
The popular Chinese teen drama film “Better Days”（少年的你）has netted over 1.5billion yuan at the box office since its release, and also won an1.（astonish）high score of 8.4 on film rating website Douban.2.（count）movie-goers have made the movie a trending topic across social media platforms,3.（say） they can’t help but be deeply touched.
The drama is one of the very few4.（movie）addressing school bullying（欺凌）. Starring award winning actress Zhou Dongyu and boy band TFBoys member YI Yangqianxi, the story5.（tell）a touching relationship between two youngsters as victims of school bullying and6.the issue shapes their fates.
7.（sad）, there is bullying at school all over the world and it is not rare in China. About half of student8.（age）between 13 and 15 worldwide, or 150 million of them, have been bullied in and around school.
According9.the Supreme People’s Court’s China Justice Big Data Service Platform, Chinese courts heard almost 800 cases of school violence in 2017, almost half of10.involved students between the age of 16 and 18.
I learned a valuable lesson from my 13-year-old son last week. We were hiking in the woods on our very hilly, rocky farm. He stopped near a cliff (悬崖) and started ______ some rather large stones towards the edge, seeing how ______ he could break them into pieces on a large rock lying at the ______. I got tired of ______ him do this after about 20 minutes and suggest that we ______ on. He refused and kept on his constant picking, ______ and throwing stones.
Finally after some time I said, “Do you ______ that you have been-picking up stones for more than half an hour? This is just the ______ task as Dad asks you to do every weekend to help ______ the fields. But you always do it for no more than two minutes, and then find a( n) ______ to quit.” His reply was, “But this is ______!”
This hit me like a rock. How many tasks that we are tired of can be ______ something fun? I know this sounds like a ______ because sometimes things are just not fun at all. ______, with some creative thinking, I bet there are ______. For example, you can try turning on some pleasant music and then dancing ______ the vacuum cleaner (真空吸尘器), or you can write a secret message in the dust on your dresser and erase it when you clean it.
For ______, organizing competitions for your employees can create some fun and increase ______. If you ______ a business yourself, you can compete just with yourself. Simply set your goals and choose a(n) ______ for your completion. The idea is to make achieving goals fun. So, make your work fun and get it done.
1.A.throwing B.piling C.building D.pushing
2.A.naturally B.successfully C.reasonably D.confidently
3.A.side B.top C.line D.bottom
4.A.watching B.helping C.hearing D.having
5.A.look B.hold C.move D.take
6.A.cutting B.carrying C.packing D.hiding
7.A.understand B.advise C.insist D.realize
8.A.right B.free C.same D.hard
9.A.clear B.plant C.protect D.create
10.A.cure B.duty C.matter D.excuse
11.A.fun B.boring C.sensible D.familiar
12.A.left out B.tumed into C.asked for D.made up
13.A.challenge B.news C.pity D.statement
14.A.Besides B.Therefore C.However D.Instead
15.A.invitations B.experiences C.varieties D.possibilities
16.A.to B.for C.with D.by
17.A.workers B.managers C.experts D.coaches
18.A.intelligence B.courage C.communication D.motivation
19.A.expand B.own C.guide D.analyze
20.A.chance B.honor C.prize D.profit
Tips for Writing a Great Speech
How to write a strong speech? There are a lot of different ways to answer that question. 1.
Read your speech out loud.
Unlike almost all other forms of writing, speech-writing is designed for listeners. So, when reviewing your text, read it to yourself and pay attention to how the words sound and feel. 2. If your phrases make you stumble （结巴）,they are guaranteed to make your boss stumble as well. Just remember that good writing is not necessarily good speech-writing.
Simple phrases are your friends.
Keep your sentences short and sweet. Compound phrases with multiple clauses may look great on paper, but are likely to confuse your audience and decrease the effectiveness of your speech. Limit yourself to one or two ideas per sentence. 3.
Do your research.
Before beginning a speech, make sure to familiarize yourself with the subject. 4. The creative aspects of speech-writing are only effective when backed by a strong foundation of knowledge by the speaker. The audience must trust your words in order for their meaning to sink in. If you' re well-prepared, it will show.
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Your listeners should be a strong determining factor of the content, tone and style of your speech. Before drafting remarks, think about who you' re speaking to, the place you' re speaking at and the timing of your speech. There's a time and a place for every type of remarks. It's your job to figure out when and where you are.
A. Know your audience.
B. Show respect to your listeners.
C. Express them as clearly and powerfully as possible.
D. Thus, you can write about it with confidence and authority.
E. Do they slip off the tongue or are they clumsy and awkward?
F. Different writers are most likely to adopt diverse approaches to speech-writing.
G. Here are rules that all writers should follow in order to write a winning speech.
①An increasing number of young people tend to rent clothes recently. Clothing rental is a hot new industry and retailers are entering this in hopes of attracting newly conscientious shoppers. This past summer alone, Urban Outfitters, Macy’s , Bloomingdale’s, American Eagle, and Banana Republic have all announced rental services—a sure sign of changing times.
②But is renting fashion actually more environmentally-friendly than buying it, and if so, how much more? Journalist and author Elizabeth Cline explored into this question and she concluded that its not as sustainable as it seems.
③Take shipping, for example, which has to go two ways if an item is rented—receiving and returning. Cline writes that consumer transportation has the second largest carbon footprint（碳足迹）of our collective fashion habit after manufacturing.
④She writes, “An item ordered online and then returned can emit（排放）20 kilograms of carbon each way, and up to 50 kilograms for rush shipping. By comparison, the carbon impact of a pair of jeans purchased in physical stores and washed and worn at home is 33.4 kilograms, according to a 2015 study by Levi's.”
⑤Then there’s the burden of washing, which has to happen for every item when returned, regardless of whether or not it was worn. For most rental services, this usually means dry-cleaning, a high-impact and polluting process. 70 percent of US dry cleaners used perchloroethylene, a carcinogenic（致癌的）air pollutant, which can produce harmful waste and air pollution .
⑥Le Tote is the only service that uses ‘wet cleaning’ for 80 percent of its items and strives to avoid dry cleaning unless absolutely necessary.
⑦Lastly, Cline fears that rental services will increase our appetite for fast fashion, simply because it’s so easily accessible. There’s something called ‘share-washing’ that makes people engage in more wasteful behaviors precisely because a product or service is shared and thus is perceived as more eco-friendly.
⑧Renting clothes is still preferable to buying them cheap and pitching them in the trash after a few wears, but we shouldn’t let the availability of these services make us complacent（自鸣得意的）. There’s an even better step --and that’s wearing what is already in the closet.
1.Why does the author mention Urban Outfitters, Macy’s?
A.to prove clothing renting is becoming popular.
B.to tell us they have joined rental services
C.to introduce the topic of the passage
D.to show us they are companies of big brands
2.How does the author develop paragraph 4?
A.By analyzing data B.by using example
C.by providing description D.by making comparison
3.What can we infer from the passage?
A.it's a better way to buy clothes cheap and pitch them in the trash than renting clothes
B.Share-washing is perceived as eco-friendly and won't lead to wasteful behaviors.
C.Renting fashion is not as environmentally-friendly as we expect.
D.Consumer transportation has the largest footprint of our collective fashion habit
4.What’s the structure of the passage?
A.①②—③④—⑤⑥—⑦—⑧ B.①②—③④—⑤—⑥⑦—⑧
C.①—②—③④—⑤—⑥—⑦⑧ D.①—②—③④—⑤⑥—⑦⑧
A disastrous fire surrounded Notre Dame（巴黎圣母院）destroyed large parts of the Gothic architecture on Monday.
“Notre Dame is our history, our literature, part of our spirit, the place of all our great events, our wars, our liberations, the center of our lives” French President Emmanuel Macron told reporters in front of the still burning Paris landmark and promised to rebuild Notre Dame.
“Notre Dame is burning, and I know the sadness felt by so many fellow French people. But tonight, I’d like to speak of hope too, ”he said, announcing the launch of a fundraising campaign.
“Let’s be proud, because we built this cathedral（大教堂）more than 800 years ago, we’ve built it and, throughout the centuries, let it grow and improve it. So I gravely（严肃地）say tonight: we will rebuild it together. ” he added.
The disastrous fire engulfed（吞没）the upper reaches of Paris' towering Notre Dame Cathedral as it was undergoing renovations（翻新）.
Tourists and Parisians looked on horrified from the streets below. France’s Interior Ministry said firefighters might not be able to save the structure.
The fire collapsed the cathedrals’ spire（尖顶）and spread to one of its landmark towers “Everything is burning; nothing will remain from the frame,” Notre Dame spokesman Andre Finot told French media. The 12th-century cathedral is home to incalculable（不可计算的）works of art and is one of the world's most famous tourist attractions, due to Victor Hugo’s novel The Hunchback of Notre Dame.
The cause of the fire was not known, but French media quoted the Paris fire brigade（消防队）as saying the fire is “potentially linked” to a 6 million- euro（$6.88 million）renovation project on the church’s spire and its 250 tons of lead. Officials opened an investigation as Paris police said there were no reported deaths. Some 400 firefighters were battling the fire well into the night.
1.What’ the main point of Emmanuel Macron’s speech?
A.Notre Dame was the symbol of Paris in history.
B.It took more than 800 years to build Notre Dame.
C.He was desperate when he made the announcement.
D.The French government are going to rebuild Notre Dame.
2.Which of the following is true according to the text?
A.Notre Dame Cathedral was burnt down entirely.
B.The structure was well saved by the firefighters.
C.People who were killed in the fire are some firefighters.
D.The fire was likely caused by a renovation project on the church’s spire.
3.What does the underlined part probably mean?
A.The novel made the Notre Dame famous.
B.The cathedral is repeatedly mentioned in the novel.
C.The novel became a bestseller thanks to the cathedral.
D.The novel became more mysterious due to the cathedral.
4.What is the tone of the author in writing the article?
A.Disappointed. B.Humorous.
C.Objective. D.Critical.
