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Last year, my family and I decide to go to Sanya celebrate my birthday. The beach was such clean that I wanted to go there as soon as we arrived. We travelled around the island, taken a lot of pictures. We had lunch at one of the small restaurant by the sea. The food was very delicious and fresh, especially seafood. My parents gave me an ice cream cake, but my sister gave me a present that she made it by herself. Everyone at the restaurant said Happy Birthday for me. It was the very impressively birthday for me. l am looking forward to go there again.
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Diet and way of life are often a problem for teenagers.1.,if you eat the right food and exercise regularly, you can feel better, look better and have more energy. So healthy eating along with regular exercise is2.(probable)the first step to become fit.
As a teenager, it is important to give your body the energy3.needs. For a healthy diet, you should eat mostly rice, bread, vegetables and fruit. The most important thing to remember when you choose food is to protect yourself from some tricks.4.number of people who want to make quick money are always fooling you into5.(believe) what they say. Don’t6.(trick)by them. What you need is just to trust a diet that is right for your body.
Exercise is also something on 7. you can depend to make you look good, feel good and be healthy. It is obvious that exercise is8.(help)to you. When you exercise, you build up the9.(strong)of your muscles and your body produces some chemicals that make you feel peaceful and relaxed.
Follow the suggestions above,10. you will look and feel much better in no time at all.
Standing in the store ’s entrance, I______this strange sight. My dad had just dropped me off to shop for Christmas______, but my brother and his friends had a more noble______for shopping,
“Do you think Caitlin will like this?” one of the boys asked. And my brother, looking rather______was standing in front of a shelf of socks. “Okay. The pink one would be a good idea,”I______He picked up one and presented it to me for______.
They used up all their______, some of which they had saved up over the course of the year for Christmas gifts. But, they had all ______to spend it on Caitlin.
Just nine days before Christmas, Caitlin's house had been ______to the ground by______. Caitlin and her parents all had escaped.______,everything in the house was engulfed(吞噬)in flames, including the Christmas presents ______to be wrapped(包装).
The school was______their books and uniforms. And all the______in Caitlin's class were taking her shopping for clothes while the boys were shopping for things like scarves and socks.
When we got home, my brother brought everything he had______for Caitlin to my room to make sure I thought she’d like everything one last time.
“I think she’ll love everything.” I said, and______him, even though he tried to push me away.I was so______of him at that moment. He______all his savings for a new skateboard______for a friend who needed a Christmas present more than he did. He had, through this act of a pure hear, captured(捕获)the true ______of Christmas.
1.A.exchanged B.observed C.repeated D.shared
2.A.dreams B.wishes C.gifts D.secrets
3.A.reason B.problem C.discovery D.holiday
4.A.ashamed B.confused C.scared D.relieved
5.A.warmed B.agreed C.doubted D.advised
6.A.approval B.relax C.change D.pity
7.A.energy B.time C.money D.patience
8.A.decided B.regretted C.failed D.happened
9.A.fallen B.burned C.moved D.exposed
10.A.nature B.hand C.mistake D.chance
11.A.Otherwise B.Instead C.However D.Therefore
12.A.waiting B.preparing C.turning D.proving
13.A.designing B.choosing C.studying D.replacing
14.A.friends B.girls C.colleagues D.parents
15.A.achieved B.accepted C.bought D.earned
16.A.pushed B.criticized C.teased D.hugged
17.A.tired B.proud C.careful D.aware
18.A.looked up B.turned up C.gave up D.made up
19.A.nervously B.fortunately C.angrily D.selflessly
20.A.spirit B.opinion C.skill D.fact
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually overpaid.1.They reach the very top of their profession. So the size of salary that stars expect is closely linked to the competition they have to overcome in order to reach success.They are, in effect, rare talents.
2.Sport stars and pop stars, for example, are soon replaced by the next younger, more energetic generation, while the good looks of most film stars quickly fade.3.
Unfortunately, professionals from other fields are paid so much less that it is hard to disagree with the statement. Teachers, nurses, laboratory researchers etc. are never listed among the best-paid professionals.4.They are more important to our well-being and our future than the stars who can earn their fortunes so quickly.
In conclusion, I think there may be some reasons why entertainment stars earn high salaries.5.The gaps between their earnings and their contributions to the society cannot be reasonable. Such professionals should be much better appreciated and better paid.
A. Things should be changed now.
B. But overall 1 agree that they are overpaid.
C. There are many people living on very limited incomes.
D. Yet they make a much greater contribution to human society.
E. So this short working life may be reasonable for the very high pay.
F. Furthermore, the majority of stars do not hold their top position long.
G. However, it is also true that only a few people can get these huge salaries.
The Disneyland parks are full of amusements, but they are also small cities that deal with deliveries, rubbish, and groups of visitors. People need to move from one place to another; they have to refuel and relax. To meet these requirements, the parks are well-equipped in reality. For example, Disneyland Park in California has a reliable transport system. In Walt Disney World in Florida, dustbins are spaced 30 feet apart, and all of them are emptied through underground tubes.
None of this happened by accident. Walt Disney first had his idea for a play land in 1937. He first imagined the park's buildings in a small size. He spent years collecting ideas by visiting other places. He studied Beverly Park in Los Angeles, including rebuilt historic villages. He visited Colonial Williamsburg, where employees dressed up and walked around.. Then he organized a team of engineers and designers to plan and build a small world he called Disneyland. Walt Disney had blueprints(蓝图)drawn up, and tried to get the permission to break ground(破土动工).
In 1953, he bought some land in Anaheim. Some designers thought it was too far, but Disney went ahead It was like building a new city Pipes had to be fixed. Railway track had to be laid around. Disney chose the hub-and-spoke(轴辐式)street pattern that many cities have. “I want Disneyland to be a place where you can't get lost,” he said, Designers and architects also diagrammed(图解)the rides and made models, while artists painted the background.
Finally in July 1955, the visitors came. If they picked up maps, they could see the results of years’ planning: the shops and restaurants, the square, and the streets. The magic city had finally jumped off the drawing board and come into real life.
1.What does the author want to show about Disneyland parks in the first paragraph?
A.The convenient environment. B.The amusing tourist attractions.
C.The differences between the parks. D.The visitors' common requirements.
2.Why did Walt Disney travel to different places including Beverly Park?
A.To choose a place for construction. B.To advertise his Disneyland Park.
C.To experience American culture. D.To get inspiration for his park.
3.What kind of person is Walt Disney according to the passage?
A.Confident but selfish. B.Stubborn but kind-hearted.
C.Considerate and determined. D.Careful and hard-working,
4.What’s the best title of the text?
A.It is worthwhile to build large parks
B.Disneyland has been built like a brand- new city
C.How a theme park was built in a big city of USA
D.Disneyland--a famous park around the world
Many people believe eating healthily is expensive and more costly than buying junk foods. But our new research, published in the BMC Pubic Health ,shows this isn’t the truth.
Less than 7% of Australians eat healthily. Most of the Australian family food budget is being spent on junk foods and drinks that are high in fat, sugar and salt. As a result, two-thirds of adults (63%)and one-quarter of children are overweight.
We used the Australian Health Survey 2016-2017 and the suggestions of the Australian Dietary Guidelines to model healthy diets for a family of two adults and two children every two weeks. We collected food prices in supermarkets and stores in high and low-socioeconomic(社会经济地位低的)areas in Brisbane, and compared the diet prices with family incomes.
In both areas, a family of two adults and two children spend about 18% more on present diets than would be required to buy healthy diets. About 58% of the food budget for present diets is spent on junk foods, including takeaway foods(14%), and sugary drinks(4%). In the low-socioeconomic area, a family of two adults and two children spend $640.20 every two weeks on their present diets, but could buy a healthy diet for $5560.93 every two weeks. In the high socioeconomic area, these numbers are S661.92 and $580.01.
Present diets cost more than healthy diets, so it is surely not the price that helps to drive preferences for unhealthy choices.
1.What did the researchers find?
A.Most Australians eat unhealthily.
B.Half Australians live on junk foods.
C.Most Australian kids have fat problems.
D.Australians have a preference for sweet foods.
2.How did the researchers get the result?
A.By doing the study online. B.By making a comparison.
C.By carrying out interviews. D.By asking personal questions.
3.What can we learn from Paragraph 4?
A.A healthy diet is actually cheaper.
B.Australian foods are becoming healthier.
C.People choose junk foods for their low prices.
D.Healthy foods are becoming more expensive.
4.What might the following paragraph be about?
A.The harm of junk foods. B.How we can eat healthily.
C.Why people choose junk foods. D.The advantages of a healthy diet.