Question

假定你是李华，你所在的城市即将举办国际青少年足球赛，组委会现面向社会招聘英语志愿者。请你用英语给组委会写一封邮件，申请成为志愿者。要点如下：

1.表达意愿；

2.说明优势；

3.希望获准。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. I m a senior high school student. With the International Youth Football Matches approaching, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer.

I think I’m fit for the job. First of all, I’ m enthusiastic about football matches. Second, I can speak English as fluently as the native speakers do, which enables me to have no difficulty in communicating with people I meet. What’s more, I have experience of volunteering and I know how to get along well with others.

In short, I’m eager to be a volunteer for the matches. I will do whatever I can to help if I am accepted.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，你所在的城市即将举办国际青少年足球赛，组委会现面向社会招聘英语志愿者。请你用英语给组委会写一封邮件，申请成为志愿者。要点如下：

1.表达意愿；

2.说明优势；

3.希望获准。

第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表达意愿。第二段，说明优势。第三段，希望获准。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: apply to，be fit for，be enthusiastic about，have no difficulty in doing，get along well，be eager to do.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句Second, I can speak English as fluently as the native speakers do, which enables me to have no difficulty in communicating with people I meet. if 引导的条件状语从句I will do whatever I can to help if I am accepted.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First of all，Second，What’s more

in short.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。