Question

海南中学建校95周年庆典迎来了钱学森塑像的揭幕和“钱学森班”的开设，作为校报英语专刊记者，请你写一篇报道向留学生介绍此事。

内容包括：

1. 钱学森其人（留学美国，回国效力）

2. 钱学森的贡献（航空航天事业)

3. 此活动的意义

注意：1. 词数 100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯。

参考词汇：揭幕unveil

A Great Gift

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Answer

A Great Gift

In memory of the great scientist Qian Xuesen, a statue of him was unveiled and a class named after him was set up in Hainan Middle School during its 95th anniversary celebration.

Qian Xuesen, who was a milestone in China’s history of science, came back to work for his motherland after finishing his further study in America. His arrival brought Chinese hope on the cause of aerospace. Being as a pioneer in this field, he contributed a lot to the development of rockets and launched the first satellite for the country.

Such a great gift inspires students to learn from excellent scientists’ spirits and to become a man like them.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇报道。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇报道：海南中学建校95周年庆典迎来了钱学森塑像的揭幕和”钱学森班”的开设，作为校报英语专刊记者，请你写一篇报道向留学生介绍此事。内容包括:1. 钱学森其人(留学美国，回国效力)；2. 钱学森的贡献(航空航天事业)；3. 此活动的意义。时态应为一般过去时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； statue (塑像)，unveil (揭幕)，anniversary celebration (周年庆典)，launch (发射)，milestone (里程碑)，contribute (贡献)，aerospace (航空航天)及pioneer (先驱)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。