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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. On Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.

 

1. devoted →devotes 2. as a usual 去掉a 3. several class→classes 4 . deeply→deep 5. too→so 6. while→when 7. 第二个came up 后加with 8. We→They 9. felt relaxing →relaxed 10. but→and 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了玛丽的父亲带她去乡下骑自行车以缓解学习的疲劳。 第一处:考查时态。句意:玛丽是一名高中生,她每天都专心上课。陈述的是客观情况,用一般现在时, who指代先行词a high school student,谓语动词用第三人称单数,故devoted 改为devotes。 第二处:考查固定短语。句意:上周六,和往常一样,她上了几节课。as usual是固定短语,表示“像往常一样”,故去掉as后的a。 第三处:考查名词的数。句意同上,several修饰可数名词复数,故class改为classes。 第四处:考查deep与deeply的区别。句意:晚上,她继续学习直到深夜。deep和deeply都可作副词表示“深”,但表示深夜常用deep,deep into the night表示“直到深夜”,故deeply改为deep。 第五处:考查固定句式。句意:她又困又累,不能有效地工作。so...that...表示“如此……以致”,故too改为so。 第六处:考查固定句式。句意:星期天早上,她正要做功课,这时她的父亲过来劝她休息一下。be about to do when表示“正要做……这时发生某事”,故while改为when。 第七处:考查固定短语。句意:很快他们想出了一个好主意。come up with表示“想出”,故第二个came up 后加with。 第八处:考查代词。句意:他们决定去乡下骑自行车。此处指的是“玛丽和她父亲”,故We改为They。 第九处:考查形容词。句意:玛丽和她父亲骑车比赛、聊天,玩得很开心,并且在户外感到很放松。修饰人用ed结尾的形容词,表示“感到……的”,故relaxing 改为relaxed。 第十处:考查连词。句意:星期一,玛丽在课堂上精力充沛,很活跃。energetic 和active之间是并列而非转折关系,故but改为and。  
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