Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分

Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. So in her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead  playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages. With his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for the school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.

Answer

1. whom→who/that

2. were→are

3. 去掉that

4. importance→important

5. instead后加of

6. read→reading

7. his→her

8. works→work

9. happily→happy

10. the→a

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。讲述Jenny是爱好写作的女孩。父母都是作家，梦想成为一名作家。她认为创造力和努力是一个好作家必不可少的。凭借她的努力，她在2019年的写作比赛中获得了一等奖，她很高兴迈出了成为作家的第一步。

1. 考查定语从句。此处是定语从句，先行词是a girl，从句中作主语，用关系代词who或that，whom仅能作宾语。故将whom改为who/that。

2. 考查动词时态。根据上下文可知，文章使用了一般现在时描述，主语是bothof her parents ，故将were改为are。

3. 考查动词不定式。分析句子可知，dream to do sth.“梦想做某事”，dream后接不定式作宾语，that多余。故去掉that。

4. 考查形容词。so是副词，修饰形容词，形容词作表语，故将importance改为important。

5. 考查固定短语。instead是副词，不接宾语；instead of“代替”后接动名词作宾语，故instead后加of。

6. 考查非谓语动词。by doing sth.“通过做某事”，介词by后接动名词做宾语，故将read改为reading。

7. 考查代词。由上文可知，Jenny是个女孩，故将his改为her。

8. 考查动词。begin to do sth.“开始做某事”，to是不定式符号，接动词原形，故将works改为work。

9. 考查形容词。was 是系动词，接形容词作表语，故将happily改为happy。

10. 考查冠词。根据语境，此处表示“成为一个作家”，是泛指，用不定冠词修饰writer。writer首字母发音为辅音音素。故将the改为a。