Question

假定你是李华，你校交换生 George最近因为起床困难导致上课总是迟到，因此他写邮件来向你求助。请用英语给他回封邮件，给予他相应的建议，内容包括：

1. 养成早睡早起的习惯；

2. 适当地参加锻炼；

3. 要意识到按时上学的重要性。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear George,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear George,

I’m sorry to know you have been annoyed at getting up and being late to school recently. Here are some suggestions I want to offer you.

First of all, you should get into the habit of sleeping and getting up early. It is the most effective way to solve the problem. Second, taking exercise properly is necessary for you, because it helps you keep energetic and leads to getting up early. Finally, you have to realize the importance of getting school on time, and even get rid of the laziness inside yourself to keep active.

I hope my advice would be helpful to you and you can get over the problem soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，你校交换生 George最近因为起床困难导致上课总是迟到，因此他写邮件来向你求助。请用英语给他回封邮件，给予他相应的建议，内容包括：

1. 养成早睡早起的习惯；

2. 适当地参加锻炼；

3. 要意识到按时上学的重要性。

第二，人称为第一人称|、第二人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，针对George最近因为起床困难导致上课总是迟到提出建议。第二段，1. 养成早睡早起的习惯；2. 适当地参加锻炼；3. 要意识到按时上学的重要性。第三段，表达期望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be annoyed at，get into the habit of， solve the problem

take exercise，realize the importance of，get rid of ,get over.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:because引导的原因状语从句Second, taking exercise properly is necessary for you, because it helps you keep energetic and leads to getting up early.省略that的宾语从句I’m sorry to know you have been annoyed at getting up and being late to school recently.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First of all，Second，Finally.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。