Question

短文改错

There was a time that I was fond of eating instant noodles very much. The instant noodles taste deliciously, because there are artificial additives in it. When my mother was not at the home, I would buy but eat some. Unfortunately, as time goes by, I found my appetite became bad. My mother said I shouldn't have had such many instant noodles, for they are low vitamins and aren't good for my healths.

After that, I developed an awareness of staying away from instant noodles and eat healthy food.

Answer

1. that → when

2. deliciously → delicious

3．it → them

4. 去掉home前的the

5. but → and

6. goes → went

7. such → so

8. vitamins前加in

9. healths → health

10. eat → eating

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者很喜欢吃面条，但是却错误地爱上了方便面。在妈妈的教导下，同时也为了自己的健康，作者决定远离不健康的方便面。

1. 本题考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是定语从句，先行词time在从句I was fond of eating instant noodles very much中作时间状语，应用关系副词when，故将that改为when。

2. 考查形容词。taste“尝起来”是感官动词，其后应接形容词作表语，故将deliciously改为delicious。

3. 考查代词。结合上下文可知，此处应用them指代复数名词noodles，故将it改为them。

4. 考查冠词。此处考查短语at home“在家”，故删除home前的the。

5. 考查并列连词。句意：当妈妈不在家时，我会自己买一些来吃。结合句意可知，“买”和“吃”是并列关系，故将but改为and。

6. 考查时态。本篇讲述过去的事情，应用一般过去时，故将goes改为went。

7. 考查副词。此处考查so和such的用法，当名词前有many/much/little/few时用so，即so many/ much/ little/ few + n.，故将such改为so。

8. 考查介词。此处考查短语be low in“……的含量低”，故在low后加in。

9. 考查名词的数。health“健康”是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将heaths改为health。

10. 考查动名词。分析句子结构可知，此处应用eat的动名词形式作为from的宾语，故将eat改为eating。