Question

假定你是李华，你的英国好友Tom 在中国做交换生，在与同学相处时遇到一些问题，写信向你求助。请你回复并提出自己的建议。

内容包括：

1. 文化差异；

2. 相互尊重；

3. 互相帮助。

注意：1. 词数100 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Tom,

Hearing that you have difficulty getting on with your classmates in China. I’d like to help you out.

Above all, it is different cultures that cause your trouble. Therefore, the more you learn about Chinese culture, the easier you will be on good terms with your classmates. What’s more, you’d better show your respect for your classmates, which may contribute to a lasting relationship with them. In addition, as the saying goes, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine. So get ready to help others whenever they are in trouble.

I do hope my advice will be helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，写一封建议信。

第一步：

审题: 建议信

人称：第一、二人称

时态： 一般现在时

结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信目的，第二部分提出具体的建议，

第三部分希望建议有帮助

要点：

1. 说明写信目的：得知Tom和同学相处不好，给Tom提出建议

2．具体的建议

①多了解中国文化

②尊重同学有助于建立长久的关系

③要乐于帮助同学

3．希望建议有帮助

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

have difficulty (in) doing…；get on with；help sb. out；different culture；cause trouble；learn about Chinese culture；be on good terms with；show one’s respect for；contribute to ；a lasting relationship；get ready to；in trouble；be helpful to

第三步：连词成句

(1)You have difficulty getting on with your classmates.

(2)It is different cultures that cause your trouble.

(3)The more you learn about Chinese culture, the easier you will be on good terms with your classmates.

(4) You’d better show your respect for your classmates, which may contribute to a lasting relationship with them.

(5) The rose in her hand, the flavor in mine.

(6) Please help others whenever they are in trouble.

(7) I hope my advice will be helpful to you.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning

Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence , consequently , thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。