Question

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Jim slumped on the couch. Mother’s Day was coming up, and he didn’t have a present. “How can I buy a present without any money?” he thought.

Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch. He noticed a large advertisement on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring a contest. “Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree (购物狂欢) for her,” said the ad.

“This is perfect!” thought Jim. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.

“My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes a lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters. And she gives the best hugs, but never in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging my mom.”

Jim liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his dad. He ran to the mailbox with his entry (参赛作品). “Mom will love having a shopping spree,” he thought.

Jim checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days passed by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mother’s Day. Jim still hadn’t heard anything about the contest.

“What am I going to do now?” he wondered. He didn’t have a present, and he didn’t have a shopping spree. And he still didn’t have any money. He had to think of something. Jim closed his eyes and curled his toes and thought so hard that his ears hurt.

注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；

2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Suddenly, he has an idea.

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The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.

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Answer

Paragraph 1:

Suddenly, he has an idea. Jim found his original contest entry. He copied it in bright red crayon on his biggest piece of yellow construction paper. Then he decorated the paper with purple glitter and glued a picture of his mom to the bottom.

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The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom. “Happy Mother’s Day!” he yelled. Mom read Jim’s poster “My mom is the best mother in the world…”. By the time she had finished, she was smiling and crying at the same time. “Thank you,” she said, wiping her eyes. “This is the best present I have ever had.” Jim smiled. “I have something else for you, too.” He said. He checked to make sure no one was looking, and then he gave mom a big hug.

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了小男孩Jim怎么才能不花钱给妈妈送母亲节礼物，这时，他在报纸上看到一则广告—-告诉我们你妈妈的特别之处，为她赢得一个购物狂欢。Jim立刻行动，写下妈妈的特别之处，然后邮寄出去，Jim焦急地等着结果。以此来续写下面的故事。

1.精读文章，掌握文章大意：章主要讲述了小男孩Jim怎么才能不花钱给妈妈送母亲节礼物，这时，他在报纸上看到一则广告—-告诉我们你妈妈的特别之处，为她赢得一个购物狂欢。Jim立刻行动，写下妈妈的特别之处，然后邮寄出去，Jim焦急地等着结果。确定文章线索，本文是以时间为线索等，接下来应该是母亲节当天发生的事情。

2.仔细审题，明确续写要求，如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等，做到“心中有数”。

3.回顾原文，想象续写内容。快速回读短文，揣摩文章的思路，结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。第一段，由于不确定自己是否能够为妈妈赢的购物狂欢，为确保妈妈在母亲节当天收到礼物，他应该是亲手做了一个礼物。第二段，应该是写妈妈收到Jim亲手做的礼物时的反应。

4.拟写草稿，修改错词病句。结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿：

Paragraph 1:

Suddenly, he has an idea. Jim found his original contest entry. He copied it in bright red crayon on his biggest piece of yellow construction paper. Then he decorated the paper with purple glitter and glued a picture of his mom to the bottom.

Paragraph 2:

The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom. “Happy Mother’s Day!” he yelled. Mom read Jim’s poster “My mom is the best mother in the world…”. By the time she had finished, she was smiling and crying at the same time. “Thank you,” she said, wiping her eyes. “This is the best present I have ever had.” Jim smiled. “I have something else for you, too.” He said. He checked to make sure no one was looking, and then he gave mom a big hug.

5.标出所使用的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语，最后誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。

6. 续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。