Question

第二节、书面表达

假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。

请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：

部分学生的饮食习惯	良好的饮食习惯	个人看法
不吃早餐； 爱吃零食； 偏食； 饮食过量	饮食多样化 饮食平衡 ……	培养良好饮食习惯的 重要性： 有助于身体健康……

注意：

1.发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥；

2.发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3. 词数100左右。

4.参考词汇：偏食 be particular about food 零食snack。

Dear fiends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.                                                                          

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                                                 That’s all . Thank you !

Answer

One possible version：

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s a very important for us to from healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast and some like to have snacks during breaks, as a result of which they can’t take in enough nutrients. We can also find that some students are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we keep fit and can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。

请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：

部分学生的饮食习惯

良好的饮食习惯

个人看法

不吃早餐；
爱吃零食；
偏食；
饮食过量

饮食多样化
饮食平衡
……

培养良好饮食习惯的
重要性：
有助于身体健康……

第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，部分学生的饮食习惯：不吃早餐；爱吃零食；偏食；饮食过量。第二段，良好的饮食习惯；饮食多样化；饮食平衡……第三段，个人看法：培养良好饮食习惯的；重要性：有助于身体健康……。第四段，结尾。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: healthy eating habits， have snacks，as a result of。enough nutrients

be particular about ， do harm to，healthy diets，develop healthy eating habits, build up a strong body, keep fit.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: 介词+which 引导的定语从句Some of us often go to school without breakfast and some like to have snacks during breaks, as a result of which they can’t take in enough nutrients.部分倒装句 Only in this way can we keep fit and can we have enough energy to study better.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Therefore，However，Besides，In my opinion.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。