Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Longjing tea, it has topped the list of the ten most famous teas in China with its color, taste and shape_? is named after its production region-Longjing Village of West Lake.

Thanks for Emperor Qianlong of the Qing Dynasty, the tea has earned a high reputation. The story went that Emperor Qianlong was visited the mountain during his Hangzhou travels, and he saw some ladies picking the tea at the foot of the mountain. He was very interested in their movements that he decided to have a go himself. While picked the tea, he received the news of his mother's illness, so he carelessly puts the leaves in his sleeve and left Hangzhou for Beijing. He visited his mother immediately upon his arrival in Beijing. His mother smelt the fragrance of the tea leaves from his sleeves and wanted to have a taste. After drinking a cup of tea, she found herself completely refreshing, and she even praised it as cure for all illnesses. From now on, the tea was listed as the tribute tea(贡茶).

Answer

it →which

for →to

去掉was

very →so

picked →picking

puts →put

sleeves →sleeve

refreshing →refreshed

as后面加上a

now →then

【解析】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了中国龙井茶，以及龙井茶与乾隆帝的故事。

1.考查非限性定语从句。句意：因其色、味和形位列中国十大名茶之首的龙井茶以产地—龙井村命名。分析句子可知此处应为非限性定语从句修饰Longjing tea，且从句中缺主语，因此用which。故it 改为which。

2.考查介词。句意：多亏了乾隆帝，龙井茶获得了很高的名声。thanks to多亏了，需把for改成to。故for 改为to。

3.考查主动语态。句意：乾隆帝在杭州游览时拜访了这座山。根据句意可知此处需用主动语态。故去掉was。

4. 考查固定句式。句意：他对她们的动作如此感兴趣以至于他自己要试一试。根据句意可知此处考查句式so...that“如此……以至于”。故very改为so。

5. 考查现在分词作时间状语。句意：当他正在采茶的时候，他收到了母亲去世的消息，因此，他随意地把茶树的叶子放进一只袖子里，然后离开杭州。pick与逻辑主语Emperor Qianlong构成主谓关系，需用主动形式，故应用现在分词picking。故picked 改为picking。

6. 考查谓语动词的时态。句意：当他正在采茶的时候，他收到了母亲得病的消息，因此，他随意地把茶树的叶子放进一只袖子里，然后离开杭州。根据其后的and left，可知此处需用一般过去时，故puts 改为put。

7. 考查名词的单复数。句意：他的母亲闻到了那只袖子里的茶叶发出的香味，并想品尝一下。根据上文，可知当年乾隆只是把少量茶叶放在一只袖子里，故应用名词单数sleeve。故sleeves 改为sleeve。

8.考查过去分词作宾补。句意：喝了一杯茶后，她感到自己精神抖擞，她甚至称赞它为一种包治百病的疗法。根据句子结构可知此处为find的复合结构，此结构中的宾补用来补充说明宾语herself，故应用refreshed“（感到）神清气爽的”；refreshing“使人精神振奋的”，常用来修饰物，例如：refreshing drinks。故refreshing改为refreshed。

9. 考查冠词。句意：喝了一杯茶后，她感到自己精神抖擞，她甚至称赞它为一种包治百病的疗法。根据语意，此处意为“一种治疗办法”，因此应用不定冠词。故as后面加上a。

10. 考查固定搭配。句意：从那时起，龙井茶就位列贡茶行列。from then on从那时起。故now 改为then。